Reviews for Diez Fleur: Akumas' Love Voyage
The Tell-Tale Man chapter 8 . 6/25/2013
Great chapter for putting the drama and suspense into it when Zoro and Robin were captured by the marines so please keep up the update soon.
Polyamory chapter 7 . 6/22/2013
Wow,

the story could end at this point, but it would still be perfect. Thanks for publishing
Whatsherface739 chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
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Okay... So first of all, I just HAVE to say, that was AMAZING! Damn! My fanfics suck compared to yours! :D
I stayed up until 5 in the morning just to read the rest. There was not a single boring part in the whole thing. I loved how you hit every single character's personalities spot-on, because in my opinion, that's one of the hardest things to do(especially when you have a hot-headed and stubborn character like Zoro with so many boundaries that you have to keep reminding yourself of). I also liked how you backed up a lot of situations with quotes and memories from things that had actually previously happened somewhere along the ever-extending journey of OP. It for sure made it seem more official, like it would really happen; like the whole thing with Kuina. No doubt I could see that happening.
I absolutely loved(and did I mention... LOVED) the story, it will definitely be my first fav, but it could use a little proofreading here and there. Also just the repetition of the same terms being used for descriptions(such as raven-haired beauty and, uh... other stuff). Those are very minor flaws, though... I would DIE if you wrote more! You inspire me. Keep it up, you got some major talent!
Mr Khan chapter 7 . 6/14/2013
Good stuff so far, though i wonder where you plan on taking it from here.

It was a good idea to avoid doing much more in the way of lemon. Porn is porn, pretty much, and the best effect of the lemon (aside from fan-service) is to break romantic tension, the payoff of all the buildup.
Mr Khan chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
I like this so far, though it's a little rough around the edges.

Advice to fix: word choice. Your grammar and syntax are usually spot on (enough that the errors are easy to overlook), but what drags this down is your diction in some cases, especially notable in the words you use for eyes, like "optics" or "hues" (i'm not sure either of those are actually proper usage of those words). Using the same word too often is bad, but you tend to run into the opposite problem. Sometimes keeping it simple is better. I noticed this with a few other words, too. It's okay to call black hair black, or to simply refer to people by their names.

Stuff I liked: Your Zoro-Robin interplay. I feel like you keep them almost perfectly in character (though there is nothing in canon to imply that they would be shy about expressing their feelings, you make that interpretation believable without having them act out of character, having most of their anxieties play out internally).

Looking forward to reading the next four chapters.
ariahsop chapter 7 . 6/8/2013
Awesome.i really love this is complaining about its length?duh,it just made the story good,i think.,so sad,last 3 chapters left,.care for a sequel?, :) ,good job!
armaani chapter 7 . 6/1/2013
Sorry for the late review...now...moving on.
Well...things are finally cleared up. I always say this that I'm not really into or really good with...romance stuff (and maybe that's why my fanfics get considerably boring/annoying at few points XP ) but this is the only pairing that, one or the other way, pull me into 'Romance' genre even though it's really hard to portray these two into a romantic relationship. Kudos for you on a doing a successful job.
What...? This is gonna end already? I thought it would go a bit more...well seeing how long the chapters can be, it probably can cover a lot of things in just three chapters. It's a good thing though :)
Anyway...Congratulations on your graduation. And Good luck with your drivers' education and of of course college as well *thumbs up*
Pentastic chapter 7 . 5/29/2013
This was cute. I like your stance on supporting artists though Zorro seems to oscillate between extremely sexist and egalitarian. He does this a little in the show but it seemed more obvious to me. I also thought Robin's virginity was unlikely. She is very confident, sure in her body and in her late 20s. Anyway these problems aside I liked it and how you handled Zorro's reluctance to date and his secrecy about Kuina. I also really liked how you made Robin rescue herself. Anyway I hope you continue it soon.
1004-Angel chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
So that's the second (and third?) time those two had sex. Hmm... at least it's official now! SQUEE! :D :D :D :D :D *insert heart emoticons here*
I'm so happy Zoro got over his bullcrap and got his act together! Awesome! I'm sorry there are so few chapters left, but don't make them any shorter! I like chapters like this. :)

And congratulations on your graduation! May the outside world be kind to you.
whywolfcity chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
I literally had to let out a "daaaamn" when Robin called Zoro out on his crap.
But the smut was not only awesome, but absolutely fulfilling. It was nice to see Zoro finally come to terms with his feelings, and it made me happy that Robin finally got what she wanted. Plus, the ending was absolutely adorable.
Brilliant chapter, as always.
- Angela
Otaku-SIG chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
Oooooh it was lovely! I enjoyed Zoro not being able to lie to her face to face about him not having any feelings for her. Beautiful.
I'll be waiting for more!
Btw, congratulations for your graduation!
guhipha chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
AWEEEEESOOMMMMEEE!
The Tell-Tale Man chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
Nicely done for the romance part paragraph and their romantic intimate between Zoro and Robin so great job and keep updating soon to what the crews gonna react next abou the newly couple.
Hakazu chapter 7 . 5/26/2013
YES! Finally they are a couple. Great chapter.
ieatcookies chapter 7 . 5/25/2013
As great as this story is, and as much as I want there to be more Zorobin fics, I suggest you go back and proofread your work. While I still understood your writing there were many grammatical errors and missing words. Good story though. Not many Zorobin writers out there.
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