|Reviews for Diez Fleur: Akumas' Love Voyage|
| whywolfcity chapter 4 . 2/27/2013
Ah, the lies! The deceit! The heartbreak! It's all too much for this fragile heart of mine. Mind you, I love a good lemon, and I love how you described Zoro's feelings as he went into it. I just hate that he finally came to terms with his feelings and then threw it all away! He's being so stubborn. And I legitimately cringed and turned away when Zoro said "yes" near the end of the chapter. I nearly cried, myself.
Characterization was brilliant, as usual. Can't wait for the next update!
| Ayamichan34 chapter 4 . 2/26/2013
Ahhhh ZORO! YOU IDIOT!
Now that I got that out...ummmm wow. I like this chapter. but Zoro you baka-marimo!
| UltimateC3 chapter 4 . 2/26/2013
Oh boy, here we go...
Zoro, seriously, what the hell are you thinking? Stop being so DAMN STUBBORN and just tell poor Robin about your stupid 'problem'. I mean geez, you say you'd rather die than hurt your nakama... yet you're breaking Robin's heart.
YOU SHOULD FEEL ASHAMED OF YOURSELF!
*Sighs* Well now that that's over, I'd like to say that this was a wonderful chapter, and I'm looking forward to how Robin handles this in the next chapter. And don't worry, I feel your pain when it comes to school work; damn teachers won't let me breathe. But unfortunately, I don't graduate until June... JUNE! *calms down before getting too angry*
-Keep up the great work!
| Santoryuu3 chapter 4 . 2/25/2013
What is it with them and huts in the middle of nowhere? Robin should totally go preggo. I'd love to see Zoro's reaction then.
Zoro: "It's just a flesh wound."
Me: "I've had worse. Have at you! I'll bite your legs off!"
Ooooo, Kuina. Why doesn't he say? I know it's a bit conflicting for him, but I think Robin at least has the right to know that she isn't who she thinks she is. But I love that end quote by Tashigi. "You're just another liar!" A perfect ending.
Several typos. I suggest when you get five minutes of breathing time go back through and edit them. I think one was "she hated lairs" as in caves and non-truth-tellers. Made me chuckle.
Well, I look forward to next months update! :D
| piratempress chapter 4 . 2/25/2013
Waaaah! I really looked forward to this! :D
Hmmnnnnnnn I didn't want the scene to end.. It was so beautiful.. then it became sad..
Oh Zoro, why do you have to make Nico Robin cry? :(
| Santoryuu3 chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
Pervert: "Saving your virginity for Roronoa Zoro."
Yeah, I tend to take a while to review, don't I? But now that I'm actually following now, I'll remember sooner. So do your best to update soon, and I look forward to how well Franky will play matchmaker. XD
| whywolfcity chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
Did I ever tell you that your page break things are really pretty?
Anyway, wonderful chapter. I'm loving the seemingly unintentional romantic progress between Robin and Zoro. Another thing I loved about this chapter is that you showed that Robin can handle herself; I admired how swiftly she dealt with the creepy guys who tried to violate her. Creeps. -3-
Can't wait for this month's update!
| DelFina18 chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
Yay, a new chapter! *-*
It was fun reading it, I liked Franky finding out about Zoro and Robin and giving her advice because I would have never thought he would be the one to find it out first. xD I thought it would be Nami or Sanji.
So, now they know they want each other, but jeez! Why does Zoro have to be so stupidly stubborn? -.- Well, but otherwise it would be boring. xD
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And don't let school get you down. ;)
| Seis Fleur chapter 3 . 1/31/2013
Fluff fluff flufff
I love Franky. He's an awesome nearly-wingman he is :3 Suuuper!
| Hakazu chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
Thanks for another chapter
| UltimateC3 chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
That was a fantastic chapter.
The calm environment and interactions between the two were a perfect transition from their struggles on the last island. The characters are perfectly portrayed and it's going at a nice 'n steady pace.
Don't stress out about updating because the wait is surely worth it.
Keep up the terrific work!
| piratempress chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
I want more! :D
Noooo, there were so many exciting scenes here, so many moment... Kyaaaaaaa!
Waiting for this chapter was worth it! I'm sure the same can be said for the next one
| UltimateC3 chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
This is one of the best stories I've read in a while. And you've only written two chapters so far!
I guess that's saying somethin'.
-Keep it up!
| Hakazu chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
Nice story. Keep it up
| XsAkUrApeTaLsX chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
OMG... That was awesome XD I totally love this story! So in character! Although a little typo error but it was still awesome. I'm lost in words. I just want more! I want more! HAHA Update soon! :D