Reviews for Kid People
PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Oh man, that may have been shorter than what I usually read, but it spoke volumes. I thought it was great that it was in El's POV too. It really emphasizes her last thought.
SubRosa7 chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
I really like this story. The way that Peter and Elizabeth are in tune is really well-written, as are their sentiments regarding Neal.
DeleaMarie chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Awwwwwwww!

If that wasn't one of the most adorable things I've ever read...

Love the Peter/Elizabeth/Neal family dynamic, and love this fic, too! :)
MCalhen chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Ah, this was very short and sweet, though sad in a way too, because obviously Neal has suffered losses. But it's great that Peter and El are still there, still willing to be family to him. And he sure does keep them on their toes, as well, in so many ways. :')
W0lf-Spirit chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
That was amazing... I was just saying that I wanted more stories that showed Peter and Elizabeth like parental figures ... Watching over him and helping him grow.
Tharin chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
I haven't seen S4 yet, but I really liked this scene. Elizabeth was very well written. My fovorite was this part: "Peter's never been a man to mind a little mess as long as it's a smart mess."
Yukihime chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
amazing! :)
gnbrules chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
AH! I love it! It's so realistic and accurate, and sweet.
caseylf123 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
That was sweet!
tinyinara chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Gorgeous - so much in so few words. Loved the 'running giggling' bit. They're all very lucky to have found a family with each other.
SallyCarefree chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
I like the story a lot.
But somehow it's one of the saddest stories I've ever read. Why? Don't know. Maybe because two people full of love and warmth settle for a life without family and feel glad to have a criminal as surrogate child.
Still, don't get me wrong. You're story is great
Chanda chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Wow. What nice writing. Love the elegance, the word play and the rich emotion. Longer story please, on this or something else. Lovely.
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Loved this.
PJ chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Oh, this was lovely! Nice fresh take on the father/son aspect of their relationship. Interesting using El's POV. Terrific writing style too. Must go check out what else you've written now! :)
Ca Staub chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
So sweet, I just loved it. :)
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