|Reviews for Second chance for happiness and peace|
| davycrockett100 chapter 97 . 12/25/2013
| alicewiggles chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
thank you and i loved your story
| jake chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
I really like the idea of this story. I found it when I went looking for long SG1 stories to start reading. I gotta say though that I am struggling through reading this for one reason...you do an awful job distinguishing who is talking. ("True. Oh tomorrow, I have a surprise for you." Sam smiled.) Only Sam wasn't the one talking ! You are constantly doing that, putting the other person's reaction after the quote. I know it can be annoying constantly writing "he said, she said, etc..." but you really have to do it. I dare you to go out and find a real book where they never use the word said. Looking back over this chapter I don't think you ever used a word like: said,exclaimed, questioned, asked, etc...I know this story is over and done with but if you do any writing in the future please do not make the same mistake.
| Shane chapter 98 . 4/25/2013
| Guest chapter 30 . 4/22/2013
this story is not what I was hoping it would be :(
| missisaac chapter 98 . 4/22/2013
oh my god loved this story so didn't want it to end. well done
| tpx1 chapter 98 . 3/19/2013
this was a really great story! I liked it!
thank you for sharing it!
| jag389 chapter 98 . 2/24/2013
Just finished it, Good job. Keep up the good work.
| dfnc71 chapter 98 . 2/18/2013
It was really fun to see how things could have been different, if only.
| Yalla chapter 97 . 2/18/2013
You know, im kind of confused. It would help if you could give a little information
on where you send our heroes WHEN you send them and not only rely on the readers remembering, you know? Its nice and i know which episode you mean (ok, barely), but many readers may not remember, and THEM you confuzzle if you write in this style...
This is a contructive critic, not more, i think very highly of you... ;)
Thanks as always, Alimoo, i cant wait for your next story!
| dpdp chapter 97 . 2/17/2013
Lovely ending. Great story. Thanks.
| Guest chapter 98 . 2/17/2013
As always I love too read your stories. Fluffy never hurt anyone. I look forward to future stories.
| jabbarulez chapter 97 . 2/17/2013
kinda left a cliffie their with Egeria... maybe a sign of things to come? Bravisimo! i loved it the good and the sad (sniffle)
| SG1fan chapter 98 . 2/17/2013
Thank you for a great wounderful story.
I hope some one will nomernated it for Gatefic fan fiction awards.
I'll be looking ford to reading some of your other stories on here.
Are you going to be posting a new story? If so, when?
| SG1fan chapter 97 . 2/17/2013
Wow SG1 and Jack have been busy killing all those goa'uld. Sam being promoted twice in eight years. Now she can enjoy her retirement with Jack and thier family. Who is Leroy wife name? SGC family sure is getting bigger