|Reviews for Second chance for happiness and peace|
| ob1292 chapter 97 . 1/30
Over all a very good story. Good Job
| ob1292 chapter 50 . 1/29
They have access to two sarcophagus it is not like they can't save her, or she could even become a Tok'ra host again. Good Job
| ob1292 chapter 36 . 1/29
Best way to destroy someone is to let them do all the work themselves. Good Job
| ob1292 chapter 29 . 1/29
It might have proved more beneficial in the future to have kept the Ha'tak, but then again there is the possibility of someone else finding it. good job
| ob1292 chapter 28 . 1/29
Well that was just stupid they could have used them to build a defense platform or arm a starship to protect earth in the future.
| ob1292 chapter 26 . 1/29
If he could go and rescue Egeria it would give them the opportunity to ally with the Tok'ra much earlier and to prevent the extinction of the Tok'ra race. Good Job
| ob1292 chapter 1 . 1/29
Hopefully there will be changes for the better of all. Good Start
| celf chapter 98 . 9/29/2014
i enjoyed this story
ps i think this is review 800 :p lol
| davycrockett100 chapter 97 . 12/25/2013
| alicewiggles chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
thank you and i loved your story
| jake chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
I really like the idea of this story. I found it when I went looking for long SG1 stories to start reading. I gotta say though that I am struggling through reading this for one reason...you do an awful job distinguishing who is talking. ("True. Oh tomorrow, I have a surprise for you." Sam smiled.) Only Sam wasn't the one talking ! You are constantly doing that, putting the other person's reaction after the quote. I know it can be annoying constantly writing "he said, she said, etc..." but you really have to do it. I dare you to go out and find a real book where they never use the word said. Looking back over this chapter I don't think you ever used a word like: said,exclaimed, questioned, asked, etc...I know this story is over and done with but if you do any writing in the future please do not make the same mistake.
| Shane chapter 98 . 4/25/2013
| Guest chapter 30 . 4/22/2013
this story is not what I was hoping it would be :(
| missisaac chapter 98 . 4/22/2013
oh my god loved this story so didn't want it to end. well done
| tpx1 chapter 98 . 3/19/2013
this was a really great story! I liked it!
thank you for sharing it!