Reviews for Second chance for happiness and peace
ob1292 chapter 97 . 1/30
Over all a very good story. Good Job
ob1292 chapter 50 . 1/29
They have access to two sarcophagus it is not like they can't save her, or she could even become a Tok'ra host again. Good Job
ob1292 chapter 36 . 1/29
Best way to destroy someone is to let them do all the work themselves. Good Job
ob1292 chapter 29 . 1/29
It might have proved more beneficial in the future to have kept the Ha'tak, but then again there is the possibility of someone else finding it. good job
ob1292 chapter 28 . 1/29
Well that was just stupid they could have used them to build a defense platform or arm a starship to protect earth in the future.
ob1292 chapter 26 . 1/29
If he could go and rescue Egeria it would give them the opportunity to ally with the Tok'ra much earlier and to prevent the extinction of the Tok'ra race. Good Job
ob1292 chapter 1 . 1/29
Hopefully there will be changes for the better of all. Good Start
celf chapter 98 . 9/29/2014
i enjoyed this story

ps i think this is review 800 :p lol
davycrockett100 chapter 97 . 12/25/2013
awesome
alicewiggles chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
thank you and i loved your story
jake chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
I really like the idea of this story. I found it when I went looking for long SG1 stories to start reading. I gotta say though that I am struggling through reading this for one reason...you do an awful job distinguishing who is talking. ("True. Oh tomorrow, I have a surprise for you." Sam smiled.) Only Sam wasn't the one talking ! You are constantly doing that, putting the other person's reaction after the quote. I know it can be annoying constantly writing "he said, she said, etc..." but you really have to do it. I dare you to go out and find a real book where they never use the word said. Looking back over this chapter I don't think you ever used a word like: said,exclaimed, questioned, asked, etc...I know this story is over and done with but if you do any writing in the future please do not make the same mistake.
Shane chapter 98 . 4/25/2013
Fantastic!
Guest chapter 30 . 4/22/2013
this story is not what I was hoping it would be :(
missisaac chapter 98 . 4/22/2013
oh my god loved this story so didn't want it to end. well done
tpx1 chapter 98 . 3/19/2013
this was a really great story! I liked it!

thank you for sharing it!
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