|Reviews for Second chance for happiness and peace|
| Syphon01 chapter 12 . 4/10
just one little quibble it is traditional that the recipant of the medal of honor to be saluted first regardless of rank unless the senior officer also holds the medal.
I've only just come across this story I can only hope that Sha'ri and daniel have a happy everafter as well.
I normally ened comments with more please but as a completed story I can just say keep up the good work
| geekymom chapter 98 . 2/3
I love your stories.
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 98 . 9/5/2015
What an amazing story here! Thanks for the well written story!
| ob1292 chapter 97 . 1/30/2015
Over all a very good story. Good Job
| ob1292 chapter 50 . 1/29/2015
They have access to two sarcophagus it is not like they can't save her, or she could even become a Tok'ra host again. Good Job
| ob1292 chapter 36 . 1/29/2015
Best way to destroy someone is to let them do all the work themselves. Good Job
| ob1292 chapter 29 . 1/29/2015
It might have proved more beneficial in the future to have kept the Ha'tak, but then again there is the possibility of someone else finding it. good job
| ob1292 chapter 28 . 1/29/2015
Well that was just stupid they could have used them to build a defense platform or arm a starship to protect earth in the future.
| ob1292 chapter 26 . 1/29/2015
If he could go and rescue Egeria it would give them the opportunity to ally with the Tok'ra much earlier and to prevent the extinction of the Tok'ra race. Good Job
| ob1292 chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
Hopefully there will be changes for the better of all. Good Start
| celf chapter 98 . 9/29/2014
i enjoyed this story
ps i think this is review 800 :p lol
| davycrockett100 chapter 97 . 12/25/2013
| alicewiggles chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
thank you and i loved your story
| jake chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
I really like the idea of this story. I found it when I went looking for long SG1 stories to start reading. I gotta say though that I am struggling through reading this for one reason...you do an awful job distinguishing who is talking. ("True. Oh tomorrow, I have a surprise for you." Sam smiled.) Only Sam wasn't the one talking ! You are constantly doing that, putting the other person's reaction after the quote. I know it can be annoying constantly writing "he said, she said, etc..." but you really have to do it. I dare you to go out and find a real book where they never use the word said. Looking back over this chapter I don't think you ever used a word like: said,exclaimed, questioned, asked, etc...I know this story is over and done with but if you do any writing in the future please do not make the same mistake.
| Shane chapter 98 . 4/25/2013