|Reviews for Focus|
| Arasia chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
That was nice and sweet :) I enjoyed reading it
| Kris chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
I think it's really cute
| Nafsi-chan chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Ah don't worry! It was very good! Yeah, so I expected something more in the ending (like a kiss), but I still liked the whole story! It was cute! And sweet! You think you could write it again, this time from Naruto's point of view? I think it'd be interesting.
Anyway, keep up the good work! I look forward to read more stories of you!
Ja ne! _
| Reviewer chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
So cute. Cool one
| OmO chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I guest your & Hinata really do complete each are the perfect yin yang.
| Codaram chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I enjoyed reading this! The details were done very nicely, something that makes it very smooth and easy to read.
I hope you're happy with this, because I sure am! Great work!
| xthinkpositive chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Awww this story is soo cute. I think it would have been better with a kiss at the end but this story is perfect the way it is. This is one of my favorite one-shot. Good work :)
| Gaaralover2247 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I LOVE IT! You did awesome on this story, I'm serious! :)