|Reviews for Guard Was Down|
| The Stargazing Shadow chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
*SQUEAL* Amir! I know that you love Sanjay!
| Rune-tsuki chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
It had a good idea, but you should try to develop it more. You repeated words, the grammar/usage/spelling constantly slipped, and the time tense was inconsistent, which made reading hard and bland. Next time, be more detailed and develop your ideas and I'm sure you'll provide a wonderful piece. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Try using a higher quality soil for higher quality crops
| ScatteredOtaku4789 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012