|Reviews for Eve's Christmas|
| pt1oef chapter 2 . 12/11/2016
Good. Very good.
| pt1oef chapter 1 . 12/10/2016
This is quite good.
| TemperanceBooth1 chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
Pretty good. Hope the next one's soon
| TemperanceBooth1 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
I think you should definitely continue the story. It's really good. I think you should put in either a dream or flashback of when Jazmine was born so as not to confuse the readers of how they ended up with a second child only four months before Christmas. But I like the fact that you have already put that they found Michael not that long after Selene released him.
| Anna-Selene-Darkness chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Why does David always looks like as a child in your stories?