|Reviews for Déjà vu|
| Your fan chapter 7 . 8/28/2015
The story is good! Please finish the story, it's kinda sad if this story ends here...
| Anonymous chapter 7 . 2/8/2015
Damn, this fic hasn't been updated in more than a year. That's really unfortunate, because this had the makings of a really good story! I would have loved to read more, and hear what happens next. I really do enjoy stories where Desmond meets his ancestors, and I really would have loved to see what would happen when Altaïr and Desmond met each other, or when Malik did (I was secretly hoping that Malik would attack him) but it looks like this fic has been abandoned, which I find really unfortunate. Please, if you read this comment, update! I really want to see what happens next! :)
Safety and peace, friend!
| Tree1112 chapter 7 . 10/10/2013
This is so exciting and I can't wait till the next chapter, Its all just so awesome!
| Vcool chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
not even miss your time reading that crap that wrote 'kindly' The Fox Family
I still don't understand why there are people that the only thing that matters is to destroy others -.- just looking the profile realize that he(?) have a tremendous hate at yaoi that no longer lets him think.. but of course! he's still wasting his time with every thing he find that has to do with yaoi to leave their hatred -.-'
just get out , will you? nobody cares about your opinions.
I told you a while agooo that I'm not fan of yaoi (or homo/bisexuality as such...although according to my friends I'm asexual... that would explain some things to me :XD:) but that doesn't mean I'm going to ruin everyone who thinks differently than me!
and as you see I'm still here reading your fic and I like this is going ;D
don't let his comments get you down!
seems that this person is just a social misfit who only takes the opportunity to vent their hate over the internet. coward...
the ONLY thing I agree with him, is that in ancient they killing homosexuals. and just that! and because is somewhat true of the history
you know if this still will be slash in the future you even can use that for vividness to your story! :D maybe a forbidden love for everyone? hehe I not know (although I'd rather not, just for the fact that Desmond knows he's his ancestor... hehe that makes me like this couple much less
| The Fox Familiar chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
Finally. I got to the end of this shitfic.
The writing and plot are horrible. So Desmond goes back in time for absolutely no reason, he has desires to buttfuck Robert de Sable, and Robert decides to "interrogate his first assassin" which is impossible since he is one of the top Templars in Europe, and granted, he would have interrogated and killed many assassins, and there is just a general WTFness to this entire story. It is not interesting, Desmond does fuck all and walks half the time, and there are wannabe suspenseful moments that are better spent elsewhere - or nowhere at all. All you can think about is buttfucking.
Plus, Desmond in the middle of Crusader Europe would be killed on the spot. And since he's a mix, he'd be killed even quicker. It's clear you have done no research whatsoever and are too busy focusing on graphic homosexual pornography to do anything but. Typical from a yaoi fangirl. You guys really are THAT retarded.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 4 . 10/8/2013
"I will try to make this historically accurate as I can" - You have it in your summary that this is going to be slash, then you turn around and say it isn't. Either way, it's still garbage and I haven't gotten to the end yet.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 3 . 10/8/2013
So basically the Arab jailors call Desmond a faggot despite the fact that Desmond isn't a homosexual. If they even suspected he was one, he'd be killed. That's the way it worked back then. And Robert de Sable had a wife and daughter, and you're going to have him engage in hardcore anal sex because you want to.
Stupid sick fuck. There's a reason why you women need to go back to the kitchen.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
"I'm going to assume Robert knows Hebrew and Arabic" - Why would he know that since he's French? He'd likely speak Norman French, German, and Old English. He's a Crusader. And unless he took a crash course in Arabic language, he wouldn't know it.
So...Desmond meets the Templars and they don't do anything about it. How realistic. I'm not even to the slash yet and this is already poorly written.
| Glorilian chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
Oh, no! I was little afraid something like this will happen, but...
And such a cliffhanger! I look forward to the next chapter!
I just hope everything will be alright.
| dacoata chapter 6 . 10/7/2013
I will give you 3 dollars to update this fic
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/28/2013
I wanna know what happens next!
| Lovestar and Silverice chapter 6 . 8/14/2013
Silver: ohhh hoohohoh these story has been very intreging! eagerly waiting for the next chapter
| Sai195 chapter 6 . 8/11/2013
I'm really digging this fic :)
Glad I found it !
Hope to see chapter 7 soon :D
| coral chapter 6 . 8/5/2013
oh god I'm login this more than McDonald's! can't wait to see more!
| KCain chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
I'm so glad this story is being updated again ;)
Way to go, Desmond! Run straight into trouble like you always do!