|Reviews for I'm sorry|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
| Silent-Sarcasm chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
hmm a snipplet...Intriguing. No matter what any one else saids I like it.
| Emrys90 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Lol go Stiles!
| 17BrazilianBabe chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Haa I love to think if this every happens that Derek is going to be reduced to animal talk because he doesn't know what to do with his emotions
| Sansaryas chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
While your idea for the story seems cute, I cannot take your grammar - And it comes from a person who isn't even English! Well, you might not be either, but that's still not an excuse - Commas (,) ARE NOT the same as they do NOT work the same way.
You need to figure this out, or most people will simply give up (as I did after the first paragraph) because there's no natural "breaks" in it, it just goes like andthenhewasalllikeohmyfucki nggodthisisseriouslyannoying .
Well, I know it's not how you write it, but that's how it feels when reading it :)
And I'm sorry if I'm being "mean" but I'm only telling you this so that you can improve - Because I'm sure this story is great, if you understand it - I mean, 9 faves - At least 9 people liked it, so it must be good...
If it was just readable :3
This is not to be taken as a flame, but constructive critism :3
So keep writing - It can only get better, and yeah, that's all from here :)
| Panda24 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
| tinker03 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
| kat4543 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
| Wolflover1989 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
p' plz post more