Reviews for Children of Fate
Squiddy Nine-legs chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
'Quite [i]Frank[/i]-ly'
I'm sorry, I couldn't resist.
DATGUY chapter 12 . 4/13/2013
Luv it XD
Guest chapter 10 . 3/14/2013
so octavian is the one that made the oath?
tizizthefrizzybiz chapter 10 . 3/14/2013
OH GODS MY MIND! I JUST HAVE IMAGES OF THE MONSTERS AND ANNABETH IN MY HEAD! AND SQUIDDY DECIDING THAT ONE OF THEM WAS THE MINOTOR IS NOT HELPING! D:

p.s. loved all the references :)
some person chapter 9 . 3/2/2013
i love this story i want the next povs to b leos thx ur awsome! :)
iTroll And iRead chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
Wow. This Fan Fiction is similar to mine :) I love it! I love the fight between Leo and Jason :D
Please read my Fan fiction everyone. I'm new and I've written 2 Fan Fictions so far. Please 'R&R'
Update soon! ;)
candyland7 chapter 2 . 2/22/2013
I don't really like Jason
tizizthefrizzybiz chapter 9 . 2/22/2013
das ist sehr gut Elizabeth. you should do Leo :)
lilylovesfabian chapter 8 . 2/19/2013
So good.
Youre truely a talented writer keep it up and update! I know schools hell but you have loyal readers! :)
MillyJane121 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
MWaaaaa...EPIC. Truly epic... For some reason I read all the other reviews first (?) and may i say that the one little nasty person (you know who you are) is evil if they think this story stinks. Well done xxx
NightSand chapter 8 . 2/13/2013
*sniffs loudly* Its SO SAD! :'( But REALLY well written. I can't wait for the next update! I don't hate you for killing Annabeth (its just a FanFic! But I'll murder Rick Riordan if he kills her!). Its very...um...unique!
Ok, I'm going to stop writing. This was meant to be a review telling you how awesome you are! So just ignore any (unconscious/seriously not meant!) things that could be mean.

...I'm just confusing myself...

Anyway, you're an amazing writer! See ya!
NightSand
tizizthefrizzybiz chapter 8 . 2/13/2013
YAY! finally Elizabeth!

does anyone else think that the doors to the cabins are kinda like dwarf doors? :D
redlox2 chapter 7 . 1/29/2013
I would like Percy POV but please don't have Percy moping about Annabeth:) (I think she is an awesome character and everything but soemtimes author focus too much on her even when it is about Percy POV:(
Olympus97 chapter 7 . 1/29/2013
Jason's view!
tizizthefrizzybiz chapter 7 . 1/29/2013
is it weird that I read that in your voice?
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