|Reviews for Top of the World|
| ShiroKame2324 chapter 24 . 2/24
I read this story for long time ago, and I can write my review right now, sorry for late review cause I read all of story via handphone and writing long review in handphone was soo difficult, as always
I wanna read all of your Shizaya story, and that story I had finished is The Happy Monster and The Annoyed Flea, Top To The World, It Just Happened, and Lies And Truth
And this is my favorite I glad I read it when it completed
I'm sooo interested and love this story, especially ch.24, 25, 26 and 27
sometimes I re-read those chapter and those always make me smiling
hope you can continue writing Shizaya story with interesting and lovely plot like this
ganbatte ne ouen shiteru yo
| EchoKatt chapter 27 . 2/17
*INTERNAL GIRLY SCREA_ING* I FREAKING LOVE THIS FANFICTION! IT'S SO ADORBABLE AND AND AND JUST AAAAAAAAAAGH I CAN'T STAND IT'S AWESO_ENESS! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK! w
| StainedSculpture chapter 27 . 1/29
I really enjoy the chapter very much though I do hope you're not really planning update this on shizuo's birthday only. it's so much fun imagining Shizuo and Izaya fool around and have a lovey-dovey (?) time on top of the ferris wheel and then Shinra had to call them to coming down and meet everyone. I love Shizuo's acting! really love it!
Thank you very much for the awesome chapter, hope to see you soon
| Flesh Delirium chapter 27 . 1/29
I'm so glad you updated after so long ! o Plus, this chapter, as the other ones, was purely great I couldn't stop myself from laughing hard across this x)
I'm really a big fan of your fanfic, it's very funny (each time I read a chapter, I almost pass away form giggling) and light-hearted. But still it is well-written and we can see that you must have think a lot about the characters' psychology ;)
Izaya and Shizuo may appear to you very OOC, but I don't think it is as blatant as you think. Ok, I unfortunately have to agree : Shizaya won't ever be canon and they won't be so "cool" around each other and even all fluffy like in your story. But in this fic, their relation evolves progressively, everything doesn't happen in all of sudden. Even if actually, all the plot takes places within a single day, it seems long because of the number of chapters you wrote x) (it's not that I'm complaining, quite the contrary). And I think it's a good point :)
One of the other things I like about your story is that you included other ships, which are cute and quite canon may I dare say ;) I'm personally an excessive yaoist fan, but not to the point to want every single character in fanfics to be gays !
Thanks you again for writing this fic, even if you doesn't like it as much as you did in the past :) It kinda helps me to "relax" from a hard-working day x)
Good continuation in everything and have a nice night/day
| envysparkler chapter 27 . 1/29
This chapter is really nice! Your style of writing reads just like the light novels. Izaya and Shizuo are so CUTE.
Thew new Durarara season has released! Have you watched it?
| Matsoine chapter 27 . 1/29
I'm glad you're back! I missed it a lot since you have been gone for a long time (shame on you! Not really, school is more important! :3) I really hope Shizuo have learnt how to toy with Izaya now, I liked Izaya flustered and Shizu-chan smirking the most! It's so amusing. Or Shizuo making Izaya embarrassed. (Sorry for my bad english, this isn't my first languange)
Love Matsoine :3
| Sakusha Saelbu chapter 27 . 1/28
I did enjoy the chapter, thanks for updating. The phone call was a nice touch, but I do feel slightly sorry for Shinra once Izaya gets his hands on him. Anyway I hope things have been going better for you since we last messaged each other. Thanks again for updating, talk to you later.
| lorella moon chapter 27 . 1/28
Woooo an update !
| numbah chapter 27 . 1/28
I love this story so much T_T no matter how long it takes, it's always worth the wait.
And lol, "arrogant holier-than-thou flea". Yep, pretty much sums it up xD
| Sapopepe chapter 27 . 1/28
So perfect for words
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/15
Hahaha ! Something about this chapter is hilarious ! Especially this part -" Shizuo UP OR I'll THROW YOU OFF AND LET THIS THING RUN OVER YOU INTO FLEA GOO !" Reminds me of the time I was with my brother on a roller coaster and said something that was simlar to this to him .
| hatteringmad chapter 10 . 1/3
Izaya getting jealous over Shizuo paying attention to Vorona and Tom. Ah, cute. I'd say they were both tsunderes, but I don't really know. I haven't met Vorona yet but she seems like an intriguing character...you mentioned that she was an assassin - but why does she seem so disconnected from reality? Ah, anyway. I wonder what's going to happen with 'Dotachin...'
| hatteringmad chapter 9 . 1/3
The superglue! I totally forgot to mention the superglue! Ah, that was hilarious. Did Shizuo really mention it after that incident with Seiji? I can't believe I missed that. Ah, the DRRR fandom sure has pretty cool source material. And then when he didn't want to hurt Izaya because he realised he /had/ hurt him occasionally and Izaya hugged him and the ensuing kind-of fight...too amusing. You write fight scenes really well. Given the nature of their relationship, I hope there's more fun later on! This is one really good story. Next chapter!
| hatteringmad chapter 8 . 1/3
Ah, wait, whoops. I must have read it wrong. Sorry, my bad! Mm, Anri's character is very cool indeed. That Shizuo would stab himself was rather amusing and that Izaya is now offering to patch him up is pretty cute. The last line of the preview...intriguing.
| hatteringmad chapter 7 . 1/3
The forwardness of it all! I'm guessing Mikado's going to blush furiously and kiss her on the cheek or something. Really, the two of them are too cute. On the topic of cute though - that part with Shizuo was really amazing. I was grinning to myself like an idiot and I had to read it a few times over. The part with Shinra and Celty was also beautifully done; I could just imagine it playing out in my head. I have no idea how you're able to write as well as you do, but I'm so very happy that you're using your talent to write this brilliant story!