Reviews for Chasing a Dream
gordhanx chapter 46 . 5/12
All right update! While it does suck, that the map broke it was a very effective way, of adding tension to the story while simultaneously keeping the story, from being over with too quickly. Guess it's back to Marvel town, to fix up the map. But first, we're finally going to meet the rest of the resistance (Aswell as a few return trips, to the other worlds). Really looking forward for that. And I'm looking forward, to see Ackmena with the rest of the crew. She's all ready fitting in, quite nicely if I don't say so myself. We officially have our seven-man crew, and it's going to be awesome seeing them adventuring through the multiverse. And back over with the villains, it was really cool to see you write Maleficent again. You defiantly know, how to portray her as the coldblooded leader, who no one wants to piss off. And of course, it was REALLY great seeing Hades and Jafar arguing. It's always a pleasure, to see these two together. Uh, Mal knows about Cora's betrayal. This is going to end bloodily… . Why interesting choice, having Ursula as the spy for her. Works surprisingly well. Back with the heroes, really interesting plot point, to have Graham know Loki and Silver during his past life. This' going to be, a very cool side plot I can all ready tell. It was very great, hearing about Graham and his former mission with Silver and his crew. Fucking lost it, at the Sombra mention XD . The mentions of the Huntsman and Ozai were great too. I love that many of the gang, flat out exclaim just how ridiculous all of this is. While you do write it off, as Fate you gotta admit the coincidences are kinda ridiculous. And speaking of Loki, it was very interesting to get a more info, on his actual goals. Seems like he's assembling his own seven-man band. Looking forward, to seeing the line-up :D . And awww, really nice job with the Jim & Jack scene. Seeing the two of them talking with each other, Jim telling Jack about the Valor thing and Jack in turn comforting him and giving him advice. It was incredibly sweet, and really helps establish them as a couple. But enough about love, let's get back to Cora! It was really great to hear, about why she freed Loki and why she left the Overlords in general. Seems like she has plans of her own. Very interesting. I'm surprised you still kept Hook around. But then, I guess he'll be useful somewhere down the road. Uh, now Jim's entering the dream world too. Really cool to see. And hey it's Riku! Awesome to see him again. Even more so, to see him meet Jim. But enough of that, it's time for the reveal of our seventh member. You know, I believe you told at one point, that the version you based Grimhilde on was from a book. Now that I have a Kindle, I might be interested in checking it out. Don't suppose, you could tell me what it's called? And oh shit! SHE BROUTH OUT GRIMHILDE'S DARKNESS! THE HAG LIVES! THIS IS VERY BAD!

Fantastic chapter man, and a great way to close out the first wave. Looking forward, to what the rest have in store.
ToonGuy chapter 46 . 5/12
Wow! This is back! I'm excited to see this! I really need to catch back up with this again, it's been a while!

Jack and Jim are just the awesomest couple by the way. I really like how you write them!

This was really nice! And that's a pretty big cliffhanger! Can't wait for Wave 2
monsterinthecloset04141996 chapter 46 . 5/12
Love it keep it up :) can't until Supernatural's world :3
yuki kirklan jones chapter 45 . 1/13
incredible! love your job
pliss update soon Im dying to know whats coming next and you wont want to be the responsible for my death (just joking) but seriously your fic is awesome and I admire that you can write so much characters at the same time and (at least on my point of view) it doesnt feel like you're forgetting some of them
much love and cookies and Ill be waiting for the next chapter
monsterinthecloset04141996 chapter 44 . 10/27/2015
this is a good chapter :3 cant wait until you put Supernatural in there lol XD
monsterinthecloset04141996 chapter 1 . 8/7/2015
I love this story and how u mix it to be like Kingdom hearts :3 In future chapters i think u should put the TV Show "Supernatural" just saying lol keep up the good work i hope u continue this story
JCMorrigan chapter 43 . 8/6/2015
SOOOOO AWESOME! I am seriously eating up every chapter of this story as you post it! I always love looking for the little crossover cameos you work into the mythos. But by far, I'm still overwhelmed by how beautifully you write the interactions between your main teams. The "Dream Team" is just so very heartwarming (when Aggie and Cid are done screaming at each other, that is...nah, it's heartwarming then too because you know they looooooove each other), and ya gotta love all them villains throwin' shade. Keep up the good work! I am biting my nails in anticipation for the next chapter! I mean, y'know, take your time, you can't rush art, but you've got me hooked.
I.C.2014 chapter 40 . 3/5/2015
I'm so glad that I caught up in this story.
Keep up the good work.
JCMorrigan chapter 33 . 5/27/2014
Great chapter.

Well, you asked… ;-)
EYKFAN chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
why haven't read this sooner! this is awesome!
thebluninja chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
" I need for ya to find the key and destroy." - You accidentally the word at the end.

"Silver needed his help. That was all that mattered." - Jimbo, you're an idiot.

"that reminded Jim of Santa Clause. " - *Claus

"The Armageddon Key was Captain Flint's ultimate weapon for destruction." - *facepalm* You don't say!

" I was only in time to save you." - What about the dumb robot, then? Can't you rebuild him? You have the technology.

It's an interesting premise. I'll give it a whirl.
gordhanx chapter 21 . 11/23/2013
OH MAN, LOKI HAS JIM! What's he gonna do with him?
gordhanx chapter 20 . 11/12/2013
Nicely done! Loved Cid repairing the ship scene, the Kal, Cora and Hook scene, and Loki's mention of Sombra.
gordhanx chapter 19 . 10/21/2013
Awesome start to the Halloweentown arc. Can't wait to see more of Kal and the characters next chapter.
KnifeInTheCrayonBox chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
Wow, I was gonna wait to leave a review until I finished, but I just have to tell you how amazing this is! I already loved how you combined Treasure Planet and Thor (two of my favorite movies), but then you went and added Once Upon A Time to the mix and I started fangirling! Three of my favorite things already, and it's only ch. 3! So I can't wait to see who else you add to the story! And I also hope I'll be seeing Loki in the future chapters! :D
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