|Reviews for Fire and Chronos|
| Bloodwitch Raven chapter 3 . 3/27/2013
I like it, I couldn't find the right one for me. And mainly I just wanted the pairing of Lyude and the Guardian Spirit :-) more than anything!
| Diamond Gargoyle chapter 3 . 11/27/2012
Ooooh Sagi. Didn't see that one coming. I enjoyed the update! Happy writing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I think the idea for this story is interesting (the whale getting involved and all) and I hope you will continue it. The tension arising with Kalas could be fun to play with. Perhaps a bit more detail about why exactly king Ladekahn wants him to marry could be useful? I know they most likely chatted it up a bit since lyude used to be an ambassador to Diadem but marriage is generally only discussed between people that are friends and a scene depicting how lyude and ladekahn got to be chummy on that level for your fic would be kinda cool to read/nice to know. Happy writing! -Diamond Gargoyle