|Reviews for First Time|
| ironicCasey chapter 1 . 1/3
the fact that I read an awkward or embarrassing parts of the story, freaking out about it, set my tablet down, and take a 30 minute walk tells me you did too great of a job on this.
| RealmOfDawn chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
This was one of the most realistic smut-fics I have read. Great job. It was full of humour and proper awkwardness.
| Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Nice work for this!
| Bob chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Nice job! I could actually see it. :)
| Sa-Petite-Lotte chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
| Bazooka-Ed chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Awwwwwww! So amazing this story is! EdWin forever!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Aww Ed is so CUTE!
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Love that Ed was clumsy and unguarded with Winry jumping head on into their experience...well written!
| LeFay Strent chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Very good. You kept them both perfectly in character.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Wow nicely done