Reviews for First Time
I'm Still So Deep chapter 1 . 5/10/2016
I loved this! Ed is such an adorable, awkward dork lol. This was very well-written and so cute! Great work! :D
ironicCasey chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
the fact that I read an awkward or embarrassing parts of the story, freaking out about it, set my tablet down, and take a 30 minute walk tells me you did too great of a job on this.
RealmOfDawn chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
This was one of the most realistic smut-fics I have read. Great job. It was full of humour and proper awkwardness.
Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Nice work for this!
Bob chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Nice job! I could actually see it. :)
Sa-Petite-Lotte chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Awesome job!
Bazooka-Ed chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Awwwwwww! So amazing this story is! EdWin forever!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Aww Ed is so CUTE!
jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Love that Ed was clumsy and unguarded with Winry jumping head on into their experience...well written!
LeFay Strent chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Very good. You kept them both perfectly in character.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Wow nicely done