Reviews for First Time
RealmOfDawn chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
This was one of the most realistic smut-fics I have read. Great job. It was full of humour and proper awkwardness.
S J Smith-Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Nice work for this!
Bob chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Nice job! I could actually see it. :)
VanillaKinpatsu chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Awesome job!
MasterSprintersan chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Awwwwwww! So amazing this story is! EdWin forever!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Aww Ed is so CUTE!
jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Love that Ed was clumsy and unguarded with Winry jumping head on into their experience...well written!
LeFay Strent chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Very good. You kept them both perfectly in character.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Wow nicely done