Everlasting... This is amazing! Your writing is amazing. How you describe his feelings, I haven't seen many use similes and metaphors like you.
Keep it up! You are officially one of my favorite authors.

My exact reaction when I finished reading this: :O WAS IT A HUMAN BEING WHO ACTUALLY WROTE THIS INGENIOUS MASTERPIECE!?

:'(

That was sad. WHY WOULD YOU WANT TO MAKE ME SAD?! Jk. It was absolutely brilliant :)