Reviews for When Heaven's Vault Cracked
anon chapter 34 . 3/31
oh god i love these stories so much, i read all 34 chapters in 2 days! but really, i love your writing style and it's so easy to empathize with Pandora through your words. these stories honestly don't receive enough credit and i hope you keep on writing!
melliemoo chapter 27 . 1/13
Exciting chapter!
melliemoo chapter 26 . 1/13
Sad chapter, although I knew it was coming. You've done a great job showing how Finnick and Pandora are growing apart.
melliemoo chapter 21 . 1/13
I like this growing relationship with Pandora and Adric!
melliemoo chapter 20 . 1/13
This was an exciting chapter! I knew the headaches had to mean something bad.
melliemoo chapter 16 . 1/10
This was a great chapter. I am kind of pulling for Adric.
melliemoo chapter 14 . 1/10
I like this twist!
melliemoo chapter 12 . 1/10
I'm eager to see what Snow has planned with all the blood tests.
melliemoo chapter 4 . 1/9
I meant to ask this with the previous story - but why no Johanna?
richards25 chapter 35 . 5/18/2013
Yeah, its up! I cannot wait to read it! :D
Dancing-Souls chapter 34 . 5/16/2013
Woah your work with this story is so amazing. I am sorry for not reviewing all of the chapters I was so excited I just kept reading and reading love your work. :D
richards25 chapter 34 . 5/16/2013
This is so good! OMG! I just love this! I cannot wait for more! Ahh! What will happen!? I need to know! Please let me know when the next story starts, I don't want to miss anything! :D
bbymojo chapter 34 . 5/15/2013
that was a really scary chapter and made me cringe.. I find myself thinking it be better for Pandora to die rather than experience this experimentation that Snow has instore for her.. :( wonder how the sequel is gonna be. when will you be posting it? please let me know! and I'm hoping for an appearance from dear Finnick, haven't given up on him yet.
Chasing Silmarils chapter 34 . 5/15/2013
This is very interesting! Love it! (P.S.: Did she die?)
bbymojo chapter 32 . 5/13/2013
Adric is a good guy but I hope you're not planning for him and her to be romantically involved.. and I reckon Nyx deserved to die, he was truly horrible and merciless with Pandora so it serves him right! very angsty episode, so suspenseful! :P
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