|Reviews for The Visceral Autonomy of Strife|
| NeverDreamsOfMe chapter 3 . 4/28/2013
Intriguing! It's a bit confusing trying to keep everything in line but then again it's 1 AM during finals week so I just may be misreading XD Your OC's are fascinating, such interesting names. I'd love to know more backstories.
Grammatical nitpick but remember to use commas a bit more to break up your long sentences :3
I hope you update!