Reviews for Put It On the Line
ICanStopAnytime chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Well done. It's enjoyable getting a narrative from a semi-outside voice like this, and you narrate it well. I'm not usually a fan of work that begins with second person, and yet this really drew me in. I look forward to more fanfics from you.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Nice. And rings true. Loved this line:
"I didn't touch the ball even once during my whole senior year, but that doesn't matter. When the uniforms got passed out – and then the rings did, after we took State – my name got read out loud and clear just like everyone else's." The guy on special teams, or the d or o line is an important as the QB- nice job pointing that out along with what else makes a team. And how fleeting it is. Football is one of those sports that for the vast majority, ends after high school. Way to put it all in perspective.