Reviews for Business Casual
Niccole chapter 10 . 8/6/2014
I liked it very much, but it started so abruptly and ended just as abruptly. There is a great story there but I wish you would have gone into some back story. In fact I went back a couple times thinking I missed a chapter or 8. Again, a great fic just wished you had given more build up & background!
momsteps chapter 10 . 7/30/2014
This Edward was so cute.
Lilith Leazman chapter 10 . 7/24/2014
Very awesome story. I like it, sad it ended right when they met everyone, but still an awesomely sassy Edward & Bella.
Tashakcooks chapter 10 . 7/21/2014
Love this Edward! I'll miss him.
CharlieA6654 chapter 10 . 6/12/2014
can you try to make a sequel? i love your story. pm me plz?
CharlieA6654 chapter 4 . 6/12/2014
loving it.
Avidus.lectori chapter 10 . 5/27/2014
Am citit povestea pe nerasuflate :D . A fost grozava ! Felicitari!
Guest chapter 10 . 5/26/2014
I was hoping that they would get married, but the story was still fun and you did a good job.
Vernoodle chapter 10 . 5/12/2014
Loved this! Just the perfect mix of funny, serious, and suspense! :))
squalloogal chapter 10 . 5/1/2014
I could definitely read the next part of this story. How they all get together. How the find out who was behind Edwards poisoning and why. The battle to stop them. All the romance. Yep. Definitely could read that.
fanfictionalcolic chapter 10 . 4/21/2014
So different
blb1000 chapter 10 . 4/13/2014
And everyone finds their mate, though human, in the end. :)
blb1000 chapter 9 . 4/13/2014
Four of them for one little human?
blb1000 chapter 8 . 4/13/2014
I don't understand why they need to go to Volterra or disappear? Just get him some clean blood, go home and cut all ties with the military. Done. At least until the Army comes after him. But he'll be a strong vamp again by then.
blb1000 chapter 7 . 4/13/2014
I'm betting their first stop will be in the forest to get a bite to eat... if he's not too weak.
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