|Reviews for All On Your Own|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/3
haha if only it could have happened! great it was fun!
| n.mansfield chapter 1 . 2/9
Absolutely loved it, the last line so perfect. Brilliant!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
And then I had to go back and read this utterly delightful prequel and find that it is even funnier than I recalled. Fabulous! I can totally see TL doing this. I especially love the use of the final lines from the patronizing canon! Oh, to see this on the screen! Thank God you write a pretty vivid picture onto the screen in my head!
| Donnamour1969 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
LOL! This was fabulous!
I've been remiss in reading your stuff. Going to try to remedy that ;)
| indianaqin chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
Awesome！Jean deserved that! Hah!
| Mispent Youth chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Newcomer to your stories here but I'm glad I found them as this was... awesome! I admit I do find Patrick Jane very frustrating and infuriating at times so this was brilliant to see Lisbon take him down and get her own back on him, and in a terrific way. Excellent story.
| Deceptively Sane chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
That was amazing. And yes. He was quite the ass in this episode.
| Jazz248 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
This is brilliant! I love that little bit about Van Pelt as well! I always feel a bit annoyed that Lisbon and her team seem pretty incompetent; the show makes it seem like they can't do anything without Jane, even though Lisbon is supposed to be one of the best! And this episode annoyed me for the same reasons, so I'm glad Lisbon got her own back, even if it is just in this story!
| Sassafras chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Lol so funny :) made me smile
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
This was hesterical. I would love to read more.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
Haha loved it. Jane can be such an arse sometimes, loved Lisbon getting some revenge
| forthecoast chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
HAH, well done Lisbon. This is absolutely perfect from start to finish. I'm so glad I've found my way to these stories. I'll definitely have to check out some of your others :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Wow ... Hot Shot and to Good to be True.
| lisbon99 chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
I confess, this is maybe the third time I've read this fic - and every time, it's *perfect*. The way your original dialogue picks up from what happened in the episode - Lisbon's thought processes in the elevator. I agree, I thought Jane was a prize idiot in this episode (as he has been at other times), and I loved seeing Lisbon get the better of him. It was hot and frustrating and awesome. I would *love* a sequel (Jane demands the rest of what Lisbon started) - any chance? Please?
| Nicotinamid chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
well done, awesome .i love it.
Wish it had a sequal. I LIke it VERRY VERRY much : 9