|Reviews for Flawed Logic|
| Thefinerthings73 chapter 1 . 8/27
Last paragraph of the first chapter. I'm done!
| Thefinerthings73 chapter 5 . 8/24
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/22
This is really, REALLY well written! Like at first i was like "idk if shes gonna pull off this whole romance thing without making it cheesy, i mean he IS a vulcan!" but you absolutely did! I have no words for how skillful you are like whoa (im rereading it now for the second time)
| Thefinerthings73 chapter 15 . 6/4
Can I just say I believe she does enjoy antagonizing him. I love them both, but to me she's acting bratty! I love this story!
| Thefinerthings73 chapter 11 . 6/4
I realize your description of Spock is the sexiest I've read. One of my favorite writers on FF... The description is sweet. I LOVE this naughty sexy Spock!
| Kate chapter 20 . 3/29/2014
That was amazing! Bless you and your incredible writing skills!
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/23/2014
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic! I loved the erotica, but equally I loved the characters and the sweet moments between them. I enjoyed to back and forth between scenes. Well done!
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/22/2014
It was hot...
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/22/2014
Love porn! More more more more
| XMarisolX chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
I can't see Spock lying or being so jealous, but I like the language of this chapter and the way you described their fleeting moments of physical contact.
| Wallace chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
| BlueCamellia chapter 20 . 9/4/2013
Okay, THIS, I adored. I have NO IDEA how you managed to keep track of the back-to-front and overlapped timeline in your chapters. But however you did it (one theory I have is time travel) I congratulate you.
In a way, the story seemed shorter than it actually was. There are twenty chapters, but I felt as though I had only read five - the story tied together that well. This is brilliant...and my god, i was tempted to lick in screen in some places. There were times where the use of the more vulgar decriptive terms for gentials was a little off-putting - but then I thought: What else is she going to call them? There is only so many times you can write penis or vagina without starting to sound like a sex-ed leaflet. Im drifting from the point...yes! Sheer brilliance!
Would you mind if I recommended this on my Tumblr page? For some reason, people tend to come to me for really good Spyota fanfiction recomendations. I think they must think there is some sort of authors guild going on. I'd be honoured if you'd let me recommend this. :3
| blissfulbeauty84 chapter 20 . 8/20/2013
I enjoyed this story the fluff, the smut the feels. Great job I haven't encountered many storied told from the end to the begining but this was very interesting.
| blissfulbeauty84 chapter 19 . 8/20/2013
Aww poor Spocky-poo. Nyota marry that man already!
| blissfulbeauty84 chapter 18 . 8/20/2013
I thought Sarek would be angry at Spock and Nyota relationship. He's only upset that they aren't married yet. LOL