Reviews for Flawed Logic
Kate chapter 20 . 3/29/2014
That was amazing! Bless you and your incredible writing skills!
Guest chapter 20 . 1/23/2014
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic! I loved the erotica, but equally I loved the characters and the sweet moments between them. I enjoyed to back and forth between scenes. Well done!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/22/2014
It was hot...
Guest chapter 3 . 1/22/2014
Love porn! More more more more
XMarisolX chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
I can't see Spock lying or being so jealous, but I like the language of this chapter and the way you described their fleeting moments of physical contact.
Wallace chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
BlueCamellia chapter 20 . 9/4/2013
Okay, THIS, I adored. I have NO IDEA how you managed to keep track of the back-to-front and overlapped timeline in your chapters. But however you did it (one theory I have is time travel) I congratulate you.
In a way, the story seemed shorter than it actually was. There are twenty chapters, but I felt as though I had only read five - the story tied together that well. This is brilliant...and my god, i was tempted to lick in screen in some places. There were times where the use of the more vulgar decriptive terms for gentials was a little off-putting - but then I thought: What else is she going to call them? There is only so many times you can write penis or vagina without starting to sound like a sex-ed leaflet. Im drifting from the point...yes! Sheer brilliance!

Would you mind if I recommended this on my Tumblr page? For some reason, people tend to come to me for really good Spyota fanfiction recomendations. I think they must think there is some sort of authors guild going on. I'd be honoured if you'd let me recommend this. :3
blissfulbeauty84 chapter 20 . 8/20/2013
I enjoyed this story the fluff, the smut the feels. Great job I haven't encountered many storied told from the end to the begining but this was very interesting.
blissfulbeauty84 chapter 19 . 8/20/2013
Aww poor Spocky-poo. Nyota marry that man already!
blissfulbeauty84 chapter 18 . 8/20/2013
I thought Sarek would be angry at Spock and Nyota relationship. He's only upset that they aren't married yet. LOL
blissfulbeauty84 chapter 16 . 8/20/2013
Vulcan/Human feels I love when Spock expresses himself
blissfulbeauty84 chapter 15 . 8/20/2013
Oh Spock gets all possessive and Vulcany!
blissfulbeauty84 chapter 14 . 8/20/2013
I hope Spock takes Nyota shopping all this sexy ass dress ripping sounds costly LMAO!
blissfulbeauty84 chapter 13 . 8/20/2013
Yeah Spock should've given Nyota the heads up that his family would be there. I'm just saying I'd be kinda pissed too. I loved the flashback of them practicing combat training
blissfulbeauty84 chapter 12 . 8/20/2013
Aww that pendant he gave her and the feels! I love it who is she going to call I wonder?
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