Reviews for Do Not Disturb
EmilytheSlayer chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Haha very nice story. Wow their Third child! Keep up the great work!
Troll99 chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
He he he. Again that sweet, adorable pain in the ass.
You somehow manage to make both of them very lovable, even more than in the show. I would LOVE to see Jamie/Orwell in your "edition" in the show. I guess it wouldn't get cancelled so soon... lol
XxDeathStarxX chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Vince is totally whipped alright, but that's just the way it should be :D

Maybe Orwell should put a "Do Not Disturb" sign on the door next time. Or maybe she secretly wants Vince to be there for her... so that she can bite his head off! Poor Vince. lol

Good work!
IronAmerica chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Hey, it's up! :D

Oh, trust me, I understand completely. Poor Orwell. *hugs her*

Heh. And now I have that one episode of ER running through my head, wherein that one woman had thirteen children... :P

Vince is a sweetie, especially around kids. :3 (I think all of David Lyons' characters are good with kids... Well, with the exception of Jimmy from Storm Warning, but let's face it, that was Jimmy and he was screwed from the get-go, right?)

*huggles Orwell again* Awwwww. She needs Vince, and not for him to be a dummy. (Although the light thing really *was* an accident.)

Run, Vince, run.

Lovely story. No quibbles, aside from: What, not even a mention of Scales? :P (Yeah, yeah. I know. If you want to see it, write it yourself.)