|Reviews for Delusions of a Super Hero|
| Ansa88 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
and the problem with the mind is that it likes to fool itself.
this is amazing-all their secret dreams of a perfect future (heh, grudgingly call friends, so red arrow) and then the whole...m'gann wishing to be green, and artemis wishing for her family and conner as well, but same and different at the same time it's all...
*goes off to cry*
| Dextra2 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
| Illucida chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
I enjoyed reading this. Roy's 'delusion' struck me the most. Nice work!
| Toadflame chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Ahh! I love it, I love it, I love it!
I think the clincher, for me, was that you used everyone as a new paragraph. It made it very easy to read and know who was speaking. And that they were short delusions, and not long sections (which is probably how I would've ended up doing it, lol).
I also love how you mentioned each one's fears and how those fears were different.
Artemis' was the saddest, I think. I mean, her dad and her sister are evil, but she pretends they aren't and that they're a happy family. And did I see a hint of Paula maybe not being in a wheelchair? (or maybe a glaring "PAULA'S NOT IN A WHEELCHAIR" thing going on)
And then Connor's was the other one that I really liked, especially how he had both a dad and a MOM, which is something that isn't really mentioned in a lot of stories.
And the hat...Roy's hat, the poor, misunderstood, abused character...