Reviews for Christian's yearning
greyfan 79 chapter 37 . 4/5/2013
Was so hot cant wait to read more
Hard Pouncing chapter 37 . 4/5/2013
It was a good chapter, but you rushed it. slow down, remember to detail. the point is not to rush and destroy the moment, but to enjoy the writing ... the reader will enjoy as well. I think you wanted to get this chapter out quickly, but don't forget to give yourself time to revise, add to, and tighten up each paragraph and the overall chapter.

look forward to your next chapter.
greyfan 79 chapter 36 . 4/5/2013
So glad you updated thank u
meigs37 chapter 36 . 4/5/2013
Oh geez ! Can you just get him to propose to her... Im waiting for it and paris romance sexy yacht what more perfect time.
Otherwise i feel the story between them isnt going anywhere... :)
Bronze Goddess chapter 15 . 4/2/2013
Okay...did I read that correctly? Did she have an orgasm on the bike?
Bronze Goddess chapter 9 . 4/2/2013
Thanks for the timelines. With the bouncing, I had a hard time keeping up - but the bouncing fed the storyline so well. Good job so far!

Love and Handcuffs!
Lynn x
Annette 101660 chapter 35 . 3/28/2013
Enjoying your story.
sillie j chapter 4 . 3/28/2013
Intrigued in this story. I really like submissive/almost catatonic Christian, don't know why. I think the scene with Grace, Elena and Christian was all okay. However, I think I recall reading about Christian having planned a week of whipping submissives in California and ending up rowing/paddling far out to the ocean daily and not really wanting to get back in some other story as well. I just can't recall whose story that was. Kind of strange.
kelmal chapter 35 . 3/27/2013
Another great chapter.
princessrolon chapter 35 . 3/25/2013
Thanks for the update, great chapter.
Hard Pouncing chapter 31 . 3/24/2013
this was so dramatic! way to go.
greyfan 79 chapter 35 . 3/24/2013
Really good thank you can't wait to read more
Cynthia74 chapter 34 . 3/22/2013
Damn that was hot. Please update soon.
kelmal chapter 34 . 3/19/2013
Another great chapter.
Pks9704 chapter 34 . 3/18/2013
Jeez. I need a drink
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