Reviews for Breaking Wonderland: Through the Looking Glass
Janus Darko chapter 16 . 3/25/2014
I went looking for this fic again because after looking at some jervisxalice fan art a few days ago I remembered Alice breaking into Arkham at the end of the first book...since then i've been reading through the entire series back to back

and I must say

WELL FREAKING DONE

it reads like an actual series of episodes from BTAS and it IS BEAUTIFUL

I can't remember if I've posted a review of any of the Breaking Wonderland chapters, but I knew I couldn't pass up a review of this chapter

the way she faked her death, Dick's reaction to it, THE INCREDIBLE DREAM SEQUENCE!

I love dream sequences that explore the character's psyche more

which reminds me, have you ever seen 'The Joker Blogs'? It's a webseries on YouTube about the Joker in Arkham after The Dark Knight, and in Season 2 we actually see a dream sequence of a certain Doctor Quinzel
jjhatter chapter 16 . 2/22/2013
HOLD IT, HOLD EVERYTHING!

Alice: What is it?

Me: You faked your own death?

Alice: Yes.

Me: And ACTUALLY fooled the blithering Bat?

Alice: Yes.

Me: And you finally chose Jervis?

Alice: Yes!

(Pause)

Me: ...Bravo! (applauds, a-la sports movie) QUICK! TEA! DRINKS ALL AROUND! (singing) I love weddings!

Alice: ...What wedding?

Me: Yours, of course!

Alice: I can't marry Jervis!

Me: What?! Why not?!

Alice: ...I'm supposed to be dead...

Me: Oh. Right.

Ahem...well, Warped Imagination, an excellent ending! Long...but good! I doff my topper to thee! (Tips hat)

Sincerely yours,
J.
jjhatter chapter 15 . 2/15/2013
...I need a quote for this one:

Mad Hatter: That was kind of weird...

Captain Jack Sparrow: You're telling me!

Love the ending! Please, go on!

Sincerely yours,
J.?
jjhatter chapter 14 . 1/29/2013
When Alice dropped her spoon, the only word I could think of was, "Ouch."

This is all...for now. Please, continue! :)

Sincerely yours,
J.
jjhatter chapter 13 . 1/18/2013
Why is it, throughout this chapter, all I can think about are the "Sherlock Holmes" films with Robert Downey Jr.?

...Oh, well.

Good chapter! Please, continue. :)

Sincerely yours,
J.
WhyTheCagedBirdSings chapter 13 . 1/17/2013
Really good chapter!
WhyTheCagedBirdSings chapter 2 . 1/11/2013
Good start of the story!
jjhatter chapter 12 . 1/10/2013
Wow...never thought I'd feel sorry for the heroes...

But...why did he rush out like that? Does he think he knows where Alice is? DID Alfred upset him? Hmm...

Well, guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter! :)

Sincerely yours,
J.
jjhatter chapter 11 . 1/2/2013
Something just occured to me: this is the Hatter from the original animated series, right?

Ahem...anyway, good chapter. Oh, please, PLEASE, update soon!

Sincerely yours,
J.
jjhatter chapter 10 . 12/27/2012
Great galloping Borogoves, Hatter, are you MAD?!

Jervis: Um...well...

Oh, wait...bad question...ahem...are you DAFT?! I THINK I see where you are going with this, but your losing trust again faster than the Flash can run!

And as for you, Richardson/Grayson...BURRRRRNNNN!

Sincerely yours,
J.
jjhatter chapter 9 . 12/19/2012
Curse you, cliffhanger!

Update S-O-O-N!

Sincerely yours,
J.
jjhatter chapter 8 . 12/16/2012
ON, HATTER! ON, SCARECROW! ON, RIDDLER AND JOKER! TO THE TOP OF THE CITY, TO THE TOP OF THE GALA, NOW, RACE AWAY, RACE AWAY, RACE AWAY ALL!

Sorry, but it's almost Christmas. ;)

Good chapter! Keep it up, please!

Sincerely yours,
J.
jjhatter chapter 7 . 12/10/2012
Heh...Scarface is funny...

Ahem...good chapter! Here's hoping Nighty and Alice SEPARATE.

Sincerely yours,
J.
James Birdsong chapter 6 . 12/3/2012
Excellent six chapters
jjhatter chapter 6 . 12/2/2012
A mass breakout? Involving ALL my favorite villains?!(Grabs a crobar, drill set, and explosives belt) SIGN ME UP!

CAN YOU HEAR ME, NIGHTWING?! WE'RE COMIN' FOR YA! HA HA HA HA HA!

Sincerely yours,
J.
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