|Reviews for The Darkness In Fate|
| oftherose13 chapter 7 . 12/3/2013
This was amazing
It's got so much depth
The emotion is just raw an feels like a true epic love
Totally a favorite
| Julielein chapter 7 . 12/3/2013
Really great story.
Sad you had to end it but it was great.
A special chapter in Laurens POV, where they find Bo after she was attacked, would be a nice bonus. If you have time I would be absolutly happy about it ;)
| msmukamo chapter 7 . 12/3/2013
Beautiful st0ry and ending. thank you f0r n0t aband0ning this story of yours.
M0re stories s0on...Thanks
| AJ chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
| anna.paige79 chapter 7 . 12/2/2013
That's a really great ending for this story :)
| Magineli chapter 7 . 12/2/2013
Return of the Pokiepup we know so well!
Lost of emotional angst and tears...
That Shakespearean love mixed with a sprinkling of Greek tragedy
I think it was a happy ending? I never know with some of your stuff..but that's what makes your stuff so go to immerse in!
So is this you preparing us for the next part of your Dawn of a new age story cause that's epic writing ;)
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/2/2013
One more please just one more :) Love Mathew his music is awesome :) one more please :)
| cheekymadom chapter 7 . 12/2/2013
Fecking perfect :D
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/1/2013
update update update...pleaassseeee
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/28/2013
Please update s0on, i cant wait any l0nger. thanx
| anna.paige79 chapter 6 . 11/28/2013
Oh, what a way to the chapter! I'm hoping that's Bo standing in front of her :)
| Athena64 chapter 6 . 11/28/2013
Well, that was hurtful but at the same time Alana knew the story right... so Lauren didn't blindside her... thank you!
| Athena64 chapter 5 . 11/28/2013
Lauren is still stuck on Bo... which is understandable, you can't forget your true love somehow... thank you!
| msmukamo chapter 6 . 11/28/2013
arghhhh! who was in the door?! You gotta be kidding me...wahahahaha...you left me in a cliffhanger again...huhuhu!
Please update ASAP and twice again...pretty pleaseeeee!
Thanks Thanks Thanks!
| Magineli chapter 6 . 11/27/2013
Self loathing and sheer bleakness of Lauren's spirit...to love with the passion of a Shakespearean tragedy...I felt her pain, without both halves neither will be whole...yeah that's our doccubus!
If it's Bo, at the door, as I suspect, Lauren's final angst driven thot does not bode well, and rock bottom is only a relative term...and relatively speaking agh agh agh to my emotional upheaval at this one...
Thanks for the added chapter today...I think?..