Reviews for The Ninth Sekirei Pillar
ZeonSilt chapter 11 . 12/21/2023
The story is already complete, and I don't know the future yet buuuuut, I will say from the point of view of the reader ... this was canon Naruto from what it seems until after the war... During the 7 years... Naruto seemed to pick up more on Fuinjustu the sealing arts ... other than the seal for Madara and the apartment they were at he doesn't seem to really use that art... During the 7 years no weapon training? They kept up the training for 7 years to stay in shape for Madara and not once Naruto thought to pick up on a different art? He has people around him that could've/should've suggested this in my opinion... Hell Kurama is smart... I'm sure he would have suggested this... and I'm shocked and sad the other Bijuu isn't in the story ... a fragment was left in Naruto could have pulled a hey we back since technically Madara doesn't hold them anymore. This goes to show as great as Jiraiya is (love the character don't get me wrong) ... for what almost 3 years the training wasn't as great as people make it sound to be. All I really want to say is I feel you could have added more to Naruto skill set from a War Hokage Naruto. Definity going to finish reading though love your story still so far Xp
Plasma Dragon 312 chapter 4 . 7/15/2023
A shame Minato got left behind. He needs Musubi in his life. The two are great together.
Plasma Dragon 312 chapter 2 . 7/15/2023
Hopefully Chiho and Uzume will get access to his blood at some point to help her.
TacysToess chapter 18 . 7/12/2023
Hpw the hell does that work? A shadow clone henged acting as a completely different entity? His chalra is literally narutos so he should still be her ashikabi?
TacysToess chapter 14 . 7/11/2023
“Sometimes he wondered if he was gay” he says about a clearly traumatised Minato after being raped, even though he stated he loved qnother girl. Poor Minato he deserves better friends *crying emoji*
Anonymous chapter 51 . 7/10/2023
Extremely well written story. Loved the plot even though I rarely read long stories. Thank You for writing this.
OkyXoo chapter 43 . 7/9/2023
Naruto Chakra is orange-yellow, thats why his chakra mode is like that
soledrive chapter 12 . 6/17/2023
well you are a shitty author who can't give proper explanation for shits he does... let's talk about it in points... 1. you mentioned that naruto has three affinities wind,water and lightning and now u say he is worse with lightning. 2 I can understand the problem with sage mode but you seem hell bent on naruto's combat abilities being hampered even for no reason... he created six clones with more chakra to do jutsu and hiraishin and he is exhausted wtf is your logic... 16 year old naruto made countless clones continuously for battling kage level shinobi when the war started and it has been 8 years since then so how can his chakra capacity be so low?... 3. you mentioned that his combat abilities has gone down cuz he has been complacent for 2 months and didn't train... the third hokage was able to fight 3 kage level shinobi even after not being in combat for years... tsunade war shown that she never trained when she was away wallowing in her sorrow but was instantly able to fight orochimaru...4. you yourself said that naruto had also branched in kenjutsu so he should be able to fight mutsu better and wasn't sasuke also a kenjutsu user didn't naruto fight him for like a decade shouldn't he have more experience in fighting with kenjutsu users?... he trained for 8 years in fuinjutsu but hasn't even shown any combat ability with it ...5. wtf is it with you and powerscaling... you gave sage mode 88 and sagemodekyuubi only 100... bro both levels have like the difference of sky and land 6. he is a master of wind jutsu but he still has to do complete handsigns 7. so managed to get naruto's mbi credit card? ... wasn't hanabi glaring at him the whole time and what kind of hokage is naruto if his awareness is so shit that he can't even notice that and your pathetic excuse of naruto being in deep thought and not noticing higa?teen Kakashi being in deep thought was able to notice a shinobi and act accordingly...8 . did naruto not learn a thing as hokage ... leaving hanabi in foreign territory while being injured and not even a clone guarding her...9. mutsu should have been on Backfoot not naruto ... naruto has more combat experience than mutsu's age and was in a war against all powerful madara and cuz of some disadvantages he is being pushed around...10. naruto's clone being surprised that yomi was able to use wind and so shocked that he was dispelled by attack , so naruto was everytime so surprised that he would be able to block an unkown attack his opponent used?... naruto knew sekirei has abilities like these but still was surprised and at the same time mutsu didn't know an ashikabi could fight like naruto but was surprised but didnt let his movement stop ... 11. the all powerful madara could not do anything while hanabi attacked even when surprised... bro he had the most powerful eternal mangekyo sharignan and hanabi's hands were blur?naruto was just a flash at his highest speed but madara was more than a match for that, he even evaded 2nd hokage's hiraishin but couldn't block hanabi ? I know the attack would still hit but he could have hit her too so wt hell and for what reason did you make naruto seem so op sensor who can't even sense anything to save his life... and your pathetic excuse ... he was in deep thought or had little chakra... bitch Karin after being stabbed and used by sasuke could sense naruto's and kurama chakra so well that she could feel them... and I'm forced to read this fic cuz I'm addicted to fanfiction that are complete. and could u please reply ...I know its too late but I wanna hear you explain ... bro
SirArchibald chapter 51 . 5/4/2023
fantastic story! thank you so much for sharing it!
jaydenafleming chapter 51 . 4/6/2023
Fucking amazing an interesting ride definitely an the immortality did catch me a bit off gaerd at first but I suppose it all worked out in the end right
chunnin33 chapter 51 . 2/18/2023
I'm pretty sure I first tried this fic out years ago and gave it up maybe 5? Chapters in or possibly when you killed off Musubi. I return to it now and can see the brilliance. A highly flawed story but like the markings on a gemstone they only help to shine the finished product.
TDR007 chapter 3 . 1/18/2023
Honestly I prefer story’s without naruto killing or condoning killing I think I’m goin to drop this
Superjukes chapter 2 . 11/22/2022
a couple pints?

damn thats a lot of blood
Jtf0012 chapter 14 . 9/20/2022
now that i think about it something sim is usedin drawing blueprints
Jtf0012 chapter 14 . 9/20/2022
there is a way to write out the sealing 3d formula in 2d. they use it in sending comunications to distant stars.
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