Reviews for A Future's Past
Guest chapter 12 . 3/14/2013
I liked the ending but I didn't understand how she came back instantly after the baby was taken if the war took three years and she had to grow up so it should have been twenty three years. I also think there should be a longer ending telling of Rin's other children and Abby's life as a wife and mother.
Not so much in detail as to make another chapter. Just a paragraph or two, but thats just me. I enjoyed the story and the sci fi feel you gave it.
StoriedFabric chapter 12 . 2/23/2013
I really like this story - it was unique and different and you wrapped it up nicely!
Anime Alert chapter 12 . 2/20/2013
Shurriushly?SHURRIUSHLY?!
Anime Alert chapter 5 . 2/20/2013
Mmm...
Anime Alert chapter 4 . 2/20/2013
Dammit,you must be related to David Eddings!It's ALWAYS gotta be a cliffie,dosn't it?!
Still,it's a great cliffie.

-L
Anime Alert chapter 3 . 2/20/2013
OK:I enjoy this is mystery.
Faliara chapter 12 . 2/9/2013
Lol... What? Sesshy decided to make a time paradox...
Rainshine5 chapter 12 . 12/12/2012
Aww I really liked this story! Except for her losing her eye part. I would've gone for some kind if scar or something. But mist because my daughter's name is Abigail (Abby for short) :)
Taraah36 chapter 12 . 11/23/2012
That's.. it?

Oh come on! You made me cry twice then you just end it ... Not fair..
Melikesthefanfic chapter 12 . 11/23/2012
This was a great story. I just clicked it to check it out but I got sucked into. Awesome job w
The Sandman's Daughter chapter 12 . 11/23/2012
THAT WAS ADORABLE!
RefiraM chapter 12 . 11/23/2012
Ok -' i cried when Abby was taken, but didn't think she would be back so soon hahahahahaha
Ok Like it! XP
A bit simple this last chapter, but it's ok...
The crying part was great TnT
Ciao
Curiosity- Or n0t chapter 12 . 11/23/2012
Cute story. I like Abigail she was very amusing and brought out Sesshomaru's inner playfulness. :D Hope to see another story soon!
Taraah36 chapter 11 . 11/22/2012
I like this format :-)...

Something happened in the past.. something bad.. I feel it.

The whole father daughter scene.. * cries* ... No further comment.
Taraah36 chapter 10 . 11/22/2012
Haha she called him old man , yet Sessh is barely in his prime. I'd love to see what he'd teach her. I can see his smirk now " Old man? I'll show you old man"
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