|Reviews for Heavenly Host Nightmare|
| JDH1080 chapter 16 . 8/12/2014
just give me a moment to let this sink in.
Wow, what an amazing read. Seriously this story was just awesome. Everything was great, I really loved the natural development between Ayumi and Yoshiki, and wow this was just great. Though I do have numerous questions. Like where's Sachiko, or what happened to Kito? Was the first body Yoshiki found Kito's sister? Eh either way this was still an amazing read, you were awesome.
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/30/2012
I must have missed something , buy what had happened to Kito?
I LOVE THIS SOOOOOO MUCH!
I just love Yoshiki and Ayumi !
I love how you made such a great story in a short amount of time with your friend and I was sooooo happy that everyday you posted a chapter!
I love the ending with everyone alive ,it makes me tear up T.T
| blueflower1594 chapter 15 . 11/30/2012
(Continueing my last review) But this was a very excellent story! WAy to go you guys!
| bluelfower1594 chapter 16 . 11/30/2012
I certainly hope you continue! Ayumi and Yoshiki haven't hooked up! NOT COOL!
| Minecchin chapter 14 . 11/27/2012
Yeah! *flails arm again* More Ayumi and Yoshiki moment!
Well, it was mentioned in wikia that Tsukiko didn't like to kill anyone. If she did, I remember she beheaded them. I kinda forget.. Mostly, the one who likes to kill the other is Yuki and Ryou, Sachiko too.. I like Tsukiko, and I think it's so cute when Tsukiko suddenly hugs Yoshiki's arm. I can imagine it, hehe
Uhm, then, about the Seisei thingy..? I sure know that it would be a problem somehow, seeing Yoshiki just throwing away the ID Card oTL Yoshiki, the hell?
This is probably corpse party fanfiction that I like the most, and possibly the fanfiction that I love the most! Keep the good work!
/Sorry for the grammar anyway qwq/
| DestinyParadox20 chapter 16 . 11/29/2012
I enjoyed the story very much! I also can't wait to meet the other characters as well! Thank you guys and ur love for Ayumi x Yoshiki! I'm also really glad the others didn't die as well! Including Seiko! (:
| abby chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Its amazing but you totally need an hardcore love or sex scene between AyumixYoshiki for ecchi lovers out here *_*
| Minecchin chapter 13 . 11/26/2012
Finally! Haha! 8D
I was like 'God, hurry up hurry up! QAQ' and when I know the newest chapter had been released, I immediately read it and was like 'what?! Ayu-tan, y'kay? QAQ' so yeah. Nice chap. :3
| blueflower1594 chapter 13 . 11/27/2012
Ayumi, why don't you punch our poor Yoshi in the gut? Grr, I'm on the look out for good Ayumi/Yoshiki fics (and you guys are definetly doing good!) but dang! They always remind me why Ayumi annoys me. Yoshi is risking his life for her and she's hung up on another guy! What did Satoshi ever do for her?
Granted, be giving her a backstory, you guys have allowed me to warm up to her a but more. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
| HisSweetestHoney chapter 13 . 11/27/2012
I don't think you fully understand how excited I was that I discovered that this exists! I've been looking for a good Corpse Party fanfiction for the better part of two months. I was thinking about writing my own (and I probably still will!), but I still find the need to thank you and your friend for existing. Even if this is just a roleplay, THANK YOU for posting it! I'm currently obsessed with this ship and I'm just sooo embarrassingly happy that there's a good fic of it!
The way the two of you write flows well together. It works! I especially like the creativity used in slightly altering the story to make it interesting. Putting characters through scenarios and seeing how they'd react is one of my favorite things to roleplay. c:
I read this entire thing way too quickly - eagerly awaiting updates! You officially have a (rather annoying ) fan.
| Hex223 chapter 12 . 11/26/2012
I love how your going with this! please continue writeing till the very end! I also love how it has the same story line as the game :) and i love Ayumi and Yoshiki together as a couple! :3 i'll be waiting for the next chapter :D update soon
| Aquatic Smores chapter 10 . 11/23/2012
Hmm... I like it. More is requested.
Kizami... how I hate him so. Hope Ayumi can get away from him and get back to Yoshiki.
Meanwhile, with Yoshiki...
| Silent Anon chapter 9 . 11/23/2012
Well, great story I read so far from Corpse party fandom...
I like the interaction between Yoshiki and Ayumi in this story...
I like Ayumi but I don't like the way she treated Yoshiki after all the things he's done for her in the game...
So, keep up the good work... And I'll wait for the next chapter...
| NeverRegretAnything chapter 8 . 11/21/2012
I think this was the best chapter yet.
| NeverRegretAnything chapter 7 . 11/20/2012