|Reviews for Pokemon Adventures: The Highest Power|
| Guest chapter 25 . 7/28
Halfway into 2017 and still no sign of you yet. What happened to you? Everything up until now was a great read and a complex plot that I just love. But that was in 2015. We've already past the 3 year anniversary (I didn't mean that as a good thing) of your last update. Where are you? I don't want to believe you are dead.
| A Pokemon Tactician chapter 25 . 1/1
Let's see if this year we'll see the continuation of this series. It's be a real shame if it stopped at this point in the tale.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
I just want to say thank you. Thank you for writing such an amazing fic. I know it's been a long time since you've updated it, but I remember reading this when it first came out. Now I've read this.. What? 5 times? Its too amazing. Thanks for it
| AllenaQuest23 chapter 25 . 8/5/2016
I must ask you... Are you still out there? I mean you said a short break but that was two years ago. Umm... Write back if your still alive. It's the internet you could have died or something and no one would know. It's really unnerving to think about. Please write again you gave me so much inspiration but I'll just worry about everybody. Thank you.
| Hermioneb chapter 25 . 4/25/2016
Please, Please, write one more, 4 of 4.
| Li Yang955 chapter 1 . 4/2/2016
So I'm guessing you're dead?
| So chapter 25 . 2/29/2016
Well, a lot of people will hate me for this, but can you kill gold and/ or mabye red? I like tragic fanfics and I wanna see how much silver actually cares for gold... Also it would suit gold as he is well known for suicide runs that he suffices by a strain of luck...
| Lady Blue chapter 25 . 9/24/2015
Hey! Awesome job with this story! It really feels like the manga! Can't explain how much I love your work, it's just the best Pokemon fanfiction, for Pokespe or not, I've ever read. That's why I just finished reading it for a second time, jeje. I just wanted to send a review since I chickened out the first time (it's really difficult to give constructive criticism when one's mind has been blown away by the awesome), so this time I just wrote to express my anticipation for the next update. Oh, I also had to mention that neither this nor the second Arc are marked as completed stories, is there any reason for that? Are you going to surprise attack us with special updates here or there after the main story is done? Wait, you couldn't tell even if that were true, ow... Anyway, that's all. My greatest wishes for you!
| nocloudypooh chapter 25 . 9/14/2015
Hi Yowl, I just finished reading all 3 of your arcs and I must say I really like reading your stories! I can't wait for you to start writing the last arc once you are back from military conscription! I understand the pressure from school and is quite aware of the stress of studying in Korea but don't give up! And good luck (:
| My appreciation chapter 25 . 8/21/2015
I know you're a little unsure to continue this wonderful series, but I want to say thank you.
I want to let you know how thankful of you for creating this wonderful series of yours and really appreciated all your hard work you did. Thank you as always.
| Aquila Aqua chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
when will arc 4 come out?
| lightningmatt chapter 2 . 5/29/2015
I just realized now that all of the pokemon received (for White, Gigalith) are the same type as the "plates" they hold!
| CeTerTel chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
(First of all, for anyone who is reading my review who hasn't finished the first three arcs yet, there are spoilers)
Alright, so I started reading this series four days ago, and I didn't stop until I reached the end of arc 3 :D One of the absolute most amazing fanfictions I have EVER read. Period. Like, seriously, this is amazing.
So, first of all, I'm going to tell your right here and now, I love how you made Sird one of the main enemies. I was reading the whole time, waiting for her to pop up! Sheesh, when the Dex holders figured out it was her, I almost started crying right there because of how epic it was :')
Also, in the English Dub, Dia and Pearl call Platinum (or Platina) Lady, not Missy. :3
Can't wait for the next installment! I'll definitely be watching for it. On that note... Do you have any idea when it may be coming?
I also have another question:
Will there be anything from Gen Six at all in the fic? For instance, Mega Evolution, Primal Reversion, etc. Oh and the Fairy Type... Although, you would need to add a Dex Holder :/ Maybe Lyra from HG/SS? Although, that would break the flow of the names that you've got going...
I absolutely adore the idea of the hall of origin having a bunch of pocket demensions. I read a fanfic called Pokemon World Tour (another one of my favorite fanfics) that had that same idea.
Anyways, I really really really really really. . . really really really really like your work. It's amazing! Thanks so much for writing it -
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Man the suspense is killing me. You just gotta finish man it's always the good stories that don't get finish. Please tell me you are going to continue. I also hope you are okay since you updated regularly
| 0this-account-has-been-deleted chapter 25 . 12/14/2014
Hello! Here, have another long review to complete the third arc! I’ll say something fist, English is not my native language (I’m from Brazil) so this review will probably have lots of mistakes and grammar erros. Please tell me if you can’t understand something.
Well, here we go! First I will tell what I loved about the whole fanfic.
I read all three arcs within one week and this is probably the best Pokespe fanfic out there. Only you and another author (who thankfully gave X and Y some love, they are my traumatized babies now ) The adventure is well connected with everything in the canon and I loved the way you made Sird the villain. I wonder if Kusaka will remember her existence someday… anyway, congratulations on the success of this difficult task. You had 16 MAIN characters in a single story and managed to put everyone in the same plot. I don’t know if you read the manga called Fairy Tail but the author, Hiro Mashima, have more or less seven main characters and another 30 important characters for the plot. He is a monster, a professional monster, but you managed to be more or less like him and this is awesome, my friend. I also loved the way you made personalities for the Pokémon partners. This is not something people normally do, they tend to focus on their trainers. But here you even put dialogues between partners and I loved it. The fact that N is interacting with everyone is awesome too, he really needed positive interaction besides Black and his sisters. I don’t think his interactions with White were positive, but at least she forgave him for Gigi. And since we are now in this topic, what happened to Gigi? I don’t remember seeing her in the fanfic. The White in your universe does not seem to be the same in pokespe but the bacon (yes I don’t like that pig) is her main partner besides Amanda.
The plot is, well, awesome. They are finally working against a cosmic horror story and dude, you know how to make it scary. I love every second when the Enemy or Sird appears, and your Darkrai have a great personality. I laughed out loud when he started to insult Sird out of nowhere.
Phew, that’s it! I hope you liked the positive review! Now I will talk about some parts that bugged me, if you don’t mind. I hope it somehow helps you in the fourth arc!
Like some people already said, there are drawbacks to having so many characters. It seems that you cannot focus on just a few and make character development. Yes, I know they already had their development in their arcs but the human being doesn’t stop developing, right? This is even the main theme in Pokémon XY: evolution. With something as huge as a sacrifice being a necessary thing to do I hoped to at least see someone be angry at their decision. Black, for example, doesn’t have the personality to just go with such negative flow. He would think hard about other solutions and ask if there is another thing they can do and even if the answer is negative I just can’t see him accepting death that easily. Sure, in the ending of the BW arc he accepted pretty easily the fact that he had to be in the light stone so maybe I’m wrong about him.
But then again, Ruby probably wouldn’t accept it, not when he saw lots of people he loved dying in front of him (before Celebi did his time shenanigans). I can’t see Gold accepting it either since he refused such concept of Heroic Sacrifice (I came here from TV Tropes by the way) since he already managed to escape from one in his own arc. The same goes for Silver. In the HGSS arc it was pretty much stated that Silver wouldn’t sacrifice his life after so much suffering in it.
This whole ordeal with them accepting death seemed out of character for me. But I’m not a specialist in the subject of criticism. This is my personal opinion in the concept of death. Besides that, well, some people already think they are this in canon, but I found Yellow and Red both a Mary Sue and a Marty Stu. They are loved by everyone, they are the strongest in their field, etc. Even when they did such a stupid decision (it was stupid in your universe, Mewtwo said so) in the hall, their Pokémon didn’t get angry at them. But maybe this is only my personal opinion again but they should at least say something like "Don't ever do something like this again!". But I read your fanfic way too fast so I probably missed something that cancels it, like, I don't know, someone pointing their erros or something? Please tell me if I missed something.
Another thing! I’m sorry if I’m being rude but this is the first time I’m doing a review for such a huge fanfic! N managed to atone for his crimes, sure, but the region of Unova doesn’t know about it. Why are they okay with the (ex)leader of an evil organization working with them? Alder might be a forgiving person and the Dex Holders saw the whole manipulation that Ghetsis had on him, but the other people (and Gym Leaders) didn’t and is for this exactly motive why he is still a fugitive in B2W2. But then again, my favorite characters are Ken Ichijouji (digimon adventure 2) and Zuko (avatar: the last airbender) so I might be biased towards the trope of Reformed But Rejected. I just think the whole process of atoning have some pain and random people angry at you, it's only natural.
OKAY, THAT’S IT. I AM SORRY IF I SOUNDED RUDE. But your whole fanfic is awesome and I am really anxious about the fourth chapter. Can you believe that everyday I go to your profile just to see if you updated? I hope everything is all right with you and best wishes with next arc!