Reviews for When I Fall
Lemniscato chapter 7 . 1/31/2014
I like the story so far, hopefully you will continue it. You made me very curious. Please update!
TheEmoVanity chapter 7 . 10/11/2013
Hmm, really interesting .

Update! #Soon !
Alma chapter 7 . 7/1/2013
PLEASE UPDATE AND CONTINUE I LOVED IT ALL AND ADDICTED HAD ME GOING MAN !
ContractKillerNO1 chapter 7 . 6/19/2013
Yay! They escaped! :)
ContractKillerNO1 chapter 6 . 5/6/2013
Wow! Boling as a metalbender.. AWESOME!
xSassyButCutex chapter 4 . 3/13/2013
I'm getting pretty interested in this story.
Please Update soon !
ContractKillerNO1 chapter 4 . 2/21/2013
Cant wait for the next chapter D
CooBroWrites chapter 4 . 1/16/2013
Hey I just read this,
And this ain't crazy
But short chapters?
Screw that most probably.
Hi I am the Kooro and I wanna say your ending for Addicted to You wasn't that good kinda and the chapters here are a bit too short. But who am I to complain I love the two so far..
Kags21 chapter 3 . 12/26/2012
So Mako has a kid or did he take the baby?
sherazard88 chapter 4 . 12/21/2012
I'm so glad you posted the new chapter! Things are getting more interesting! Keep up the great work! :3
Dragon-Bowl chapter 3 . 12/11/2012
Did Mako baby-nap Korra's baby? O.o
ContractKillerNO1 chapter 3 . 11/21/2012
Cute scene with Mako and the kid :)
maiakahana244 chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
god i hate Mako right now and Amon is no better
The assassinOmorose chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
I love it! You'd be a great famous author _ if you need me to proof read or help with anything I'm your girl _ by the way Atkah mean Aisle in old Hindi.
The assassinOmorose chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
I love the sequal and the prequal it's just...is Ezra the supposed Atkah that was dead? Also who is the father?
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