|Reviews for Tales of the Alternate Universe (Deluxe Edition)|
| Phoenixstar117 chapter 31 . 12/9/2014
Enjoyable story with an interesting cause for it all. JAKE WISHED FOR A SANDWHICH. HAHAHA! I laughed so hard when I saw that the reason the world was still farmworld was because of Jake's wish. This story was good, and when the Ice Prince was so sad and lonely. Made me cry man. Great job.
| MUTO TOHO chapter 31 . 6/13/2014
Ok i know im breaking that dumbass rule about puting one review per chapter but you do realize that u deleted the sequal to this fanfic because your retireing and i can understand why your retiring, life allways comes first no matter what but i dont think there wad a reason to delete the other fanifics i might have wanted to read them. If there is a reason please let me know because i really dont want to sound like a total jerk
| Gold Testament chapter 23 . 6/12/2014
Marceline. She's trying to change hers and Finn's history.
| Fundindar chapter 21 . 6/3/2014
Heh, disregard that last review
| Fundindar chapter 18 . 6/3/2014
Heh, I don't really think a shoulder strap would be able to support Flanna's weight, but ARTISTIC LICENSE!
| srghostarc11 chapter 30 . 5/23/2014
Heya there. I can't believe you retired...It made me sad, really.
You'll still be the best author here in FF in my opinion. I swear I would finish The Line That Divides, not only for you but for the characters you allowed me to borrow.
Will you be back someday? Now you had me rereading this again...for the umpteenth time. Haha
| MUTO TOHO chapter 31 . 5/13/2014
Everything in this story was brilliant. It went from being fantastic at the beginning, then when Ooo came it was just okay, and worked its way to being fantastic again. Thank u for this fanfic, I loved reading it and I might just read it again some time soon. Anyways I'm glad I read this fanfic and I hope to see much greater projects of yours in the future.
| MUTO TOHO chapter 27 . 5/13/2014
Thank u, u gave me the ending I was hoping for now I don't feel upset anymore.
| MUTO TOHO chapter 26 . 5/13/2014
:) this is just what I wanted
| MUTO TOHO chapter 25 . 5/13/2014
This isn't the same as the farmland story, this is a completely different story than what I just read. Its very sad that everything is ending up going down hill like this for both Finn and this story. Flanna was right, everything was going great until the destiny gang had to ruin everything. They're the reason why Finn and Flanna are no more. And I have to ask why didn't you just have someone destroy the crown. Finn was being consumed by it so why couldn't you just have a rock fall on it and crush or something, that would have set him free from his abstention over the crown.
| MUTO TOHO chapter 22 . 5/13/2014
Ok I have to address something. WHEN DID WE GO FROM BEING IN A FARMLAND TO THE LAND OF OOO? Seriously the farmland stuff was perfect I loved it but that the kid is in Ooo it kinda gets rid of the purpose of having a god dang farmland. And when the hell did we go from a couple who hated each other as kids and then ended up becoming a couple to a magical world where there are worm like DRAGONS. Like I said the farm stuff is fantastic I love it, but the stuff in Ooo it's okay I guess, I really don't care for it I just want to see them in the farmlands again. I don't want Ice Prince and Flame Princess I want Finn Mertans and Flanna Haksworth. They were perfect and why didn't you just end it with Finn and Flanna on the roof or something I don't want Flanna dying and Finn becomes a man who can't think of anything else but ice that's too heartbreaking. Heck I actually cried while reading the chapter Lich, I'm dead serious, I really did cry reading that chapter. Okay maybe this will go somewhere maybe everything will go well at the end maybe they'll be back to being Finn and Flanna at the end of the story, I have no idea.
| MUTO TOHO chapter 21 . 5/12/2014
| MUTO TOHO chapter 19 . 5/12/2014
Oh s**t this not gonna end well is it? (NOPE) I see.
| MUTO TOHO chapter 12 . 5/9/2014
Geesh. No wonder Flanna wasn't in the farmlands when Finn went all ice crazy.
| MUTO TOHO chapter 11 . 5/9/2014
I've got nothing, I've got absolutely nothing. I mean what the heck am I supposed to say?