Reviews for Enveloped in the Darkness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Another chapter. :) It was great by the way. I enjoyed seeing how Harry dealt with various aspects of the magical world. I also loved that you had Harry meet Cedric in Madam Malkins and Draco in the bookstore (and that Draco wasn't such a prat early on that Harry didn't listen to him). Hopefully something can be done about Harry's situation before Dumbledore has a chance to step in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how handled Harry meeting Draco and Cedric. I don't think Harry was OOC here. He wants into this new world and got a good read on McGonagall at the orphange so knows he must be on his best behavior to make sure she doesn't decide not to bother with him and kick him out of the new world-I know she wouldn't do that but the way he grew up he would be very consious that the good things can be snatched from him in the blink of an eye. He would probably be very afraid that this new world can be taken from from very easily. Looking forward to seeing how Lucius reacts to the news of where Harry lived. Even if he is a bastard here I can see him having the same reaction as Draco about the Potter heir being in the muggle world instead of the wizarding. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far, it's been really interesting. :D I love your portrayal of Harry and how he met Draco Malfoy. Please continue! :D |
![]() ![]() I tried to press 'next' button but guess what, it wasn't there. This story really caught my attention and I can honestly say that annoying lack of next chapter is the ONLY reason I'm writing review. Congratulations, I read a lot of fiction(probably not healthy think to do but hey) and muttering obscenities because I reached the end is quite rare. Yes, I'm still irked and I hope it shows(post new chapter you wrenched teasing person).So lets start and work some steam. Following are the things I don't like. I've never been at orphane,and I know how cruel can childs be,but this always hated by everyone concept seems little streched for maybe I saw too much of blowing it of proportions. I know he just entered wonderland, but in light of his personality, he is tad too open sometimes (e.g. explaining himself to McGonagall), while I know him to be distrusting. That's all I can think of at the moment(meaning your story is really good).Now, as I'm calm let's move to things I like. Of course they are inferior. I woud be disappointed that we don't know how he set them stight, except I'm not because my imagination can work this by itself. So this is chalenge? I've never notied, but now I think it's not that hard to spot. After all they are nasty little bugers that thing very low of wizards. Meeting with Voldemort made my suck my breath and exhale after it was over, I really hoped to meet him again( guess I purposedly ignored word count).So write soon or else(you know the psychotic-fan drill). He tried to show how special he and after it failed he newer tried again.I just hope he will train his wandless in secret and show it only when in dire need(be it to save himself, impres the Dark Lord, or rub it in someone face). Overall i like how you portraied him. And if it was't clear enough: Please write soon because I'm going to check several times a day, and if you don't then I'm going to be one fictionally-frustrated, story-starved wthdrawal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story! Looking forward to reading more of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, it is good fic, continuation please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! cant wait to read more update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mentor!Voldemort? I hope Harry gets sorted into Slytherin. I'd love to see everyone's reactions. Especially Voldemort's and McGonagall's. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm... Interesting. I wonder how his interactions with Voldemort develop? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome so far. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! that was an interesting first meeting with Voldie. Will his scar hurt him in Hogwarts if Voldie sees that Harry is more likely to side with him than Dumbles? It will be interesting to see how Harry acts at Hogwarts. He says he refuses to be ignorant so it will be interesting to see what he learns before school. Will he be forced back into the ophanage? He can always stay at the Cauldren. I can hardly wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so bloody amazing! that meeting between Harry and Voldemort was beyond awesome ;p |
![]() ![]() E. P. I. C. I LOVE IT! Please update more ASAP! |