Reviews for Enveloped in the Darkness
Lunalover009 chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
Looks good :)
xxxkris44 chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
let me start by saying that i love this!
it is very thought provoking and bitter-sweet. it is also very well written.

a small part of me wishes for harry to have had a better childhood, but another part of me knows that stuff happening this way serves a purpose. this way harry will be strong and not succumb to pressure. he is also cured of falling for first nice face he sees. all in all, this way he will be spared a lot of pain.

and let me finish by saying i hope to see more of this, much, much more:)
Pernicia Hart chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
I have read quite a few harry in the orphanage st ories and have to say, in just two chapters, yours is one of my top favorites, withing the top 3. So impressed already and am looking forward to more.
Heh chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
This is quite an interesting story you have here; I enjoyed both chapters and look forward to more of course. I do hope it doesn’t have slash in it because well, there are so few that don’t while still being Dark.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
liking this! i also like the fact that it was McGonagall who brought him his letter,as DD may have noticed that harry reminded him of someone else .
eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
RebeliousOne chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
Interesting start! I can't wait to see how you develop this.
Stardust of Orion chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
A very good start. I look forward to reading more.
Kamorie chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
How interesting. I hope you'll continue.
tgsoccer chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
look forward to more chapters!
Grey Daughter chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
Poor Harry. This sounds really good, I'm just wondering if it's going to be Dark!Harry only or Evil!Harry. Before I forget, if I'm not mistaken magic cannot conjure food. The chapter was great, anyway.
sousie chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
oh can't wait to read what you will write next
13AkiraKuranXIII chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Brilliant! I can't wait for more.
LadyDragon17 chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
I do really like the begining of this story, it has deph and I like the hope he had with the Crawfords addopting him. I do hope that the next chapters are similer in standard.

For slash, while I do activly read it, I would like it to be a simple thing. In other words for it to be there but not really thought about, or a purly platonic relationship. Inplied slash but we all know it really isn't, I think I like that more than slash itself. Though you don't have to do that, though I never read much het before, so I would probably prefer no relationships at all for this story.
Ultimate Kaiosama chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Love the story so far. Cliche idea, but I like your take on it. The prologue/chapter 1 was very good, and I can't wait for more.
floraly chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
A good start. Looking forward to more!
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