| Reviews for Enveloped in the Darkness |
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   maiqsmail chapter 5 . 6/30/2023 Interesting start, although Harry do sound too eloquent for a 11 y.o. at times. Perhaps, this is an orphanage with some impressive library and lots of free time, then? |
| maiqsmail chapter 2 . 6/30/2023 If I was Harry in this scene, there would be two questions that I would ask: why is she sure it was the killing curse that was cast onto him if there were no witnesses and the outcome is not what usually happens after killing curse? And what happened after that so he ended in non-magical orphanage? |
| half of my life is reading chapter 2 . 6/20/2023 His disposition reminds me of a young Tom Marvelo Riddle. Whom many know as Lord Voldemort |
| Victor Izotov chapter 5 . 5/12/2023 This is a well-written story, very interesting and easy to read. The only thing is, Harry seems too old for 11 years. I can't imagine a child having a conversation literally on an equal footing with an experienced politician like Lucius. |
| Tri-Edge chapter 10 . 3/9/2023 And now you're just handing out power-ups to Harry with no drawback? At least try to make it believable. |
| Tri-Edge chapter 8 . 3/9/2023 The sheer amount of arrogance that your Harry Potter is imbued with is nearly beyond words. He is, quite literally, everything that Severus Snape feared in the source material: an entitled malicious brat with no respect for anyone else, let alone figures of authority such as his professors. |
| Tri-Edge chapter 6 . 3/9/2023 The characters come across as caricatures at times, not always mind you, but they are heavily flanderized. I'm not particularly a fan of it. Pansy's characterization was especially egregious. |
| Tri-Edge chapter 5 . 3/9/2023 This wasn't bad by any means, but it did feel too on the nose. There was nothing subtle here, in any ongoings: Lucius was as discrete as a battering ram at the gates; what more, Harry is acting nothing like his age would suggest, and with much too confidence for his situation. |
| Jay chapter 1 . 2/12/2023 I wish you could finish the sequel, Mister Brigade Sir. This is an awesome story…you’ve created the best Voldemort ever. I’m your fan. |
| Arcane Warhammer chapter 1 . 2/8/2023 Nice fic. Enjoy. |
| Tamy DC chapter 8 . 1/20/2023 I actually can't believe he gave THAT! to Harry, he's but a first year! |
| MollyMuffinHead chapter 14 . 11/22/2022 Thanks for the story. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/20/2022 Little side scenes between other characters, especially when they concern the lead character, add a lot of flavor to a story and are to be encouraged. |
| LiLbOoKwOrLd chapter 6 . 8/31/2022 If you haven't read it, Basilisk-born by Ebenbild is one of the best hp fanfiction in my opinion, and it has originality in spades... and as a bonus, it is really well written |
| Aselo chapter 14 . 8/15/2022 He claims not to be a ruthless serial killer but he did try to murder an infant of two of his foes which is pretty ruthless |