What an absolutely fantastic story. The character development was spot on throughout and the plot had me hooked from the start. Definitely one of the top things I've read on this site. It's a shame the sequel was never finished but thank you for such a great story

Cum bean?

Really enjoying the story. Surprisingly convincing journey to Harry accepting as the host of Voldemort. Well done!

This is such a great story. I really do wish you had written it until the end but I’ll have to make do with the little of the sequel you’ve written. Thanks for sharing!

I’m not always a fan of dark Harry stories, but so far I’m enjoying this one! It’s a shame you seem to have stopped writingor at least publishingbecause I would like to read a continuation from this.

Hehe. "Fine. My lord. Happy?"
Lol.

I'm actually impressed Harry felt responsibility for what Fudge did. He could have just said fudge used him and left it at that. Even though people warned him against it. That's what he did in the books, kind of.

I'm getting...sociopath vibes from Harry? He doesn't seem to have an emotional reaction to anything except anger. Though he appreciates friendship in a sense. Like with Cedric.
For example he feels like he "owes" Lucius, but has no kinder emotion or loyalty to him for all the help he was given.

Wow...I can actually see this happening if Harry bothered to think critically or keep an open mind. It's so easy to do the "right" thing by one side if you don't think about it.
Then again he is starting another war..

Sykes was really nice to Harry actually, even though Harry kept threatening him.
And Harry ..I'm not sure he respects anyone? Like their opinions don't matter to him in the slightest. Almost envy that.

Everyone tried to warn Harry that Snape was dangerous and Harry cursed him behind his back? What would he have done if the curse hit? He could have been expelled!

Hmm...I found it almost odd that Harry would distrust Lucius and even speak against him to Draco, after everything Lucius did for him. But that's an important part of Harry's personality I think. To be unapologetic and not blindly or through gratitude trust anyone.

Dumbledore got power cuz of manipulation. There's no other way to keep the public's regard for so long. Even with Harry "their savior" they liked and hated him in turns.
I'm not saying he's an evil guy, but he isn't a very good one either.
Wow Voldemort! Lucius was loyal to him, even defending him to Harry and he gets repaid with a kick in the face.

Omg. The every flavored bean! Rofl

I always thought Draco would have made a really loyal and powerful friend if you didn't get immediately offended at his bit of attitude. Book Harry didn't have the maturity to see that. I'm glad this one did. He really cared about making friends.