|Reviews for Rival|
| YenGirl chapter 1 . 3/23
Lovely! I liked how you wrote Kakashi's restraint and how the days without Gai just... stretched for him
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
Awww, Kakashi really does care!
| MadroxMR chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Excellent story! I was laughing at the end; I could picture Gai standing there in his undies making bold declarations and challenges. Your description of the hospital was really very apt; like the detail about the ledges and how Kakashi should have left five minutes ago when all the alarms finally summoned medics. Loved how you showed the very gradual way Kakashi started to miss his being around too. Really very well written all around!
| whitealmond chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
omg, this is so sweet and just so THEM. :,) I enjoyed it very much.
| Surreptitious Chi X chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Ah, Gai. I'm glad Kakashi relented in the end. A little. The hospital scene is very vivid, and very Gai. I admit I was worried about him, only to be somewhat resigned and exasperated as I watched him mutiny against the hospital equipment. I'm right there with the med nin.
| thisloser chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
I loved this so much! Such a great look at the characters and a very sweet ending. I hope you don't mind my adding your fic to my community for Good KakashixGai fics.
Anyway, thanks for sharing!
| Prescripto13 chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
"Ignoring the alarm still ringing from the heart monitor . . . "
I was giggling at the imagery, 'Thorn. XD