Reviews for The Lost Lupin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I went to live journal. Was the post removed? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh the positive future for these young'uns! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So I'm slowly making my way through your stories, so excited you have so many! I really liked this one because it stayed so far away from canon pairings and keeping canon events in intact - which tbh is a weakness I think of my own writing, I'm super hesitant about changing major plot points. It threw me off a little bit that Hermione wasn't worried about Harry being born when she got with James, but I liked how you resolved that with her dreams. Again the best part of this story which I loved also in Roundabout Destiny was how well you craft the sibling relationships- you're amazing at it! Also bringing in such wide cast of characters and managing to develop them properly with their own story lines that weave in and out of the main cast! Usually when a read a fic with a huge cast of characters popping in and out they are very one dimensional or forgetful - this was so well written I adored all the separate story lines - especially the relationship between Marlene and Hermione and further back the little teasers you gave us of Luna and Hermione. Absolutely fantastic, thank you so much for devoting so much time to writing and publishing such wonderful works. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this thank you so much ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story very much thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have come to the conclusion that this fanfiction is a bit too crackficy (probably not intended to be but it seems so). Lots of stuff just randomly popping out, not enough exploration of their motivations (or just lacklustre and dull reactions to things). Disappointing since the premise was so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I tried to find your live journal page with the lost lupin but what I found just brought me back here. loving the story so far thank you for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this! |
![]() ![]() I really like the story so far but I tried to find the redacted version on the live journal but it just takes me back here. I was wondering how I could read the smut lol. Though the story is amazing even without it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was genuinely such a lovely story. thank you for sharing it with us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The character development is good but i honestly cannot find myself being fond of the relationship hermione has with james and sirius, it seems like she is still hesitant with the boys. honestly did not like dorea for a long while, felt good when the healer berated her. all in all though, this is a good story, i like the plot and the pace but the relationships seem a bit superficial for some reason, though i absolutely adored severus and dorcus, wouldn't have mind reading a seperate oneshot for them both. |
![]() ![]() I love your style and your stories. I wish you could find the time to finish some other stories that I got addicted to. And honestly, I will never give up hope. There is such an amazing sense of completeness when I finish a story… And I feel so very grateful for the journey we have been given . Thank you so much. |