|Reviews for Farewell Flyboy|
| Sollenbum chapter 5 . 7/30/2013
It is so refreshing to read a new constellation of characters. You portray them very convincingly. However, if you ever do a revision, you might want to replace "plutonic" with "platonic" :-)
| VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 21 . 6/7/2013
Great ending, though hopefully Harm doesn't expect an answer! ;-)
| Michi uk chapter 21 . 6/6/2013
I'm sorry it's ended, but you wrote a brilliant story Thanks!
| ArmyDT42 chapter 21 . 6/4/2013
Outstanding ending. Good to see proper respect due. And definitely a very well written story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing.
| rlrct chapter 21 . 6/4/2013
| jpstar57 chapter 21 . 6/4/2013
Very nice ending. You done good.
| jslee102 chapter 21 . 6/4/2013
Sorry to see it end. That was a nice way to end it. I particularly liked the wall scene.
| Jeneral2885 chapter 21 . 6/4/2013
one typo "An you"
Goo that Skates is still part of the picture
| Saissa chapter 20 . 6/4/2013
Meg has abandonment issues - she cries when Harm is leaving - just like Mac also has abandonment issues - she was angry that Harm was leaving her.
Harm really needs to find a NORMAL girl to love - not one who has abandonment issues.
Harm himself also has abandonment issues (his father left him when he was a child) but does he whine and mope about it? No Way! He pushes on with his life. So why cant Meg and Mac do the same thing?
| ArmyDT42 chapter 20 . 6/4/2013
Nice ending. It's nice to see a look into Meg's home life. Really enjoying this fic. Looking forward to the next update.
| VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 20 . 6/4/2013
Well, he couldn't be in a better and worse position right now:
a) he doesn't have to take the risk of getting hurt and get himself to tell her everything consciously
b) she now knows and he is thus open to rejection
Anxious what happens next!
| rlrct chapter 20 . 6/4/2013
Maybe it is a short chapter, but it looks like it ends at a logical breaking point. Some deep emotions here. Nicely done. Too bad just 1 more chapter!
| Jeneral2885 chapter 3 . 4/27/2013
Nice mention of Skates
| VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 19 . 4/14/2013
another amazing update, please keep it up!
| Michi uk chapter 19 . 4/11/2013
After all his help , one nightmare has took Meg back to square one, and now poor Harm has to return to Jag, with this on his 't wait for the next chapter.