| Reviews for The Chronicles of Camelot: The Snake, The Boy and the Chamber |
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  Guest chapter 26 . 2/29/2024 Not to be obtuse, but you claim here that a rewrite is up but the only other stories there (two others) are NOT Potterverse stories at all. If you did post a rewrite but pulled later, that's fine, but should you still have notes both here in-chapter and also in this story's description claiming there is a non-existent rewrite? My take FWIW, leave this original version for those who still care for it, but at least correct the erroneous description reference. |
 mattzem6 chapter 4 . 12/29/2023 Is it just me or does Thunder-Born seem super cheesy? Kind of like a knockoff Dragonborn. |
| evanprice42 chapter 17 . 6/22/2023 bbj |
| Gear master chapter 13 . 3/5/2023 Is that a fate reference? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2022 Hi, sorry to bother you, but did you remove a bunch of your stories? |
| thunderofdeath97 chapter 26 . 2/4/2022 i didnt see a rewrite anywhere |
| dumbledork chapter 7 . 3/12/2021 You are gifted in world building, detail but story is indeed bland. write some character interaction. it doesnt have to be friends but make him interact with more people villians, lover or any other person. His endless power ups can get booring. but still a great fanfic you have written |
| Speedster1014 chapter 4 . 1/6/2021 realmhe should be split otherwise great job |
| Aire5 chapter 5 . 4/1/2019 Great fic so far quite engaging n.n |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/25/2019 this 'story' if it can even be called that is just a mass of exposition and a list of the things harry has done. the grammar is super trash you constantly repeat wordswords likelike this for somesome stupid reasonreason. |
| Sypho Dias chapter 26 . 3/17/2019 Damn it we don't want a rewrite! We want this story to continue. We don't need anything else. Just please update this story. No need for any rewrites or elaborate stuff. Just update this story and keep it as it is! Please update man, I plead of you. We really love this story. |
| Sypho Dias chapter 25 . 3/17/2019 ...really? You're a college student with a tiny penis, uh I mean laptop? That part was like... wow srsly?! Well and here I was thinking that you should have left fumbles alive so that he could have a challenge. But now... yeah. You know I was thinking that they were going to have an orgy then and there in the last part! Though what happened to weasley and Granger? Haven't seen hide or tail of them for a while... looking forward for when he goes to conquer China. That's gonna be pretty exciting. And the shinobi and samurai as well! Love all the different pantheons and legends and myths going around. It's what makes this a singularly unique fic. This is one of my most favourite stories! Gg author! |
| Sypho Dias chapter 23 . 3/17/2019 was that the valley of peace? as in... KUNGFU PANDA?! |
| Sypho Dias chapter 13 . 3/10/2019 Man you really need a beta... |
| Sypho Dias chapter 7 . 3/10/2019 Yeah... *wince* it is a bit bland. |