Arolover chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
nice as always btw ek scene kya fashion wali movie say liya...woh hair mess karnay wala hahaha nice chappie and cute abhirika relation u showed.:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
I didn't like it but but u can improve and I know you will be the always best author ever in the wold thx xx
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
tit was mind blowing...
shehneer chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Vampire Breath chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
woeh critical situation and a good story yaar:D
HIDEnSEEK 06 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
so so romantic and nice that what can i say? there is a secret i reavel that i am the aditya.
btw muse sabse jda ye story passand hai.
darknite0403 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Nice story it took me this long to comment. All emo nicely expressed. Abhi and Rajat convo during MU was funny. And Rajat's act of leaving and giving space was so gentlemanly. And no word to say about Abhirika moments in the end. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Tarika got maried to depak frm lucknow and tarika is frm ahemdabad and depak is frm lucknow and their weding cermony had done in lucknow in a temple
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Dr tarika had maried to deepak on thursday and depak is frm lucknow and tarika is frm ahemdabad
aditya srivastav chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
i like the story . i want to see this really on tv
Noni0816 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
DewDrop29 chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Wow it was fantastic loved it:)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Create a marriage song for abhijeet and tarika
abhirika luv chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
wow really nice story it was really nice it was a good story keep rightin
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