Reviews for Too Close
rapalacha chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
This was interesting view...but i liked it a lot. Nice action writing, little bit out of character maybe, but that doesn't mind...Anyway, who would not like to make our heroes even more heroic?
arcee93 chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
hahahahah this fic is great :) i enjoy so much
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Not bad. I like the story, especially how efficient Jim appears as Captain. However, I think you should investigate a beta-reader. There are quite a few grammar/spelling/punctuation mistakes that could easily be rectified if you had a second set of eyes. If you don't want one, just review your story several times before posting. I'm sure you'll catch the majority of them.
LORETTA JEAN chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
THANK YOU FOR YOUR STORY. NOT TOO MANY MISTAKES JUST SOME FROM A QUICK STORY FLOW TO KEYBOARD. I ENJOYED READING IT.
Aqua Mage chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Great fic!