Dear It's All About Them:

Promising so far, I'd say. There's one line, though, that I can't for the life of me make out: where Loki says, "Is that slander the humans use for the New York Times?" It means something, I suppose, but not something that appears to have any relation to the context. Are you sure "slander" was the word you were looking for? (Albeit, if it wasn't, I truly can't guess what was.)

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

This is an adorable story and I couldn't wait to start reading it once a certain person shared it with me. Adding to my favorites to finish later, since it's currently 2:30 am and I'm exhausted lol

lol, would have been funny if loki had magicked ellen into a little pug dog, or sonething, at the ball. LOL.
good, humorous, and an easy read. great job.

This is the best Loki story ever

OHMYFREAKINGGOSH! Sooooo cute!

Loki would be better at playing the 12th Doctor than the person that actually got the job in real life

BAD LOKI! *swats him with newspaper*

I like Kitty and Mulan. They're AWESOME!

Loki is so awkward it's funny! Loki and Eli sittin in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N- Ahhhhh! *screams in terror and runs away as Loki appears in room*

Lol he wants to impress Eli!

*sigh* Loki needs to go by a different name and only apply for a job at places that are hiring.

Out of curiosity, where is that picture of Tom Hiddleston from? Is it from a show or movie?

Aww, Loki's so mean.

"Loki is my ruler!" That's really funny.

Oh this is a great story. I'm sad that it's over I had a great time reading this. I hope to see a sequel or a one shot of their kid.