|Reviews for Friendly Fire Incident|
| dd113 chapter 10 . 11/17/2013
Semper woof very funny. Love the oc's .
| flaunt chapter 15 . 11/8/2013
Well for the first time in a very long time I find a few minutes to read some fic, so it's great to see chapter 15 up. :-)
And months away from the story has done little to diminish your capabilities, you're continuing to grow as a writer, and the psychological exploration into the characters is interesting and intriguing - especially the sort of PTSD experienced by soldiers in combat.
St. Claire's bluster makes sense, and his motivation for the act is a refreshing take. That he's not only saving his own bacon, but his belief that he is protecting a sacred trust between conventional and special forces - irony in that his lies protect that trust :-). - makes his character well-rounded and intriguing.
Hope to read more soon. :-)
P.s. congrats on the red sox. (Damn you) :-)
| db1019 chapter 15 . 11/7/2013
Excellent addition to your story, so glad to see you posting again! I knew you had something planned for St. Claire - sad to see that he has neglected proper medical treatment for his own men, though, in order to save himself. Loved that Harm and the others decided NOT to wait that additional time to conduct their interviews, and were lying in wait for St. Claire. Well done - can't wait to see where you will take this next!
| byrhthelm chapter 15 . 11/7/2013
Good to see you back in print, but way too short a chapter, but at least you've confirmed that St Claire is trying to hide something (which we all more or less knew anyway!)
I reckon he'd better hope that his suspicions of unfair treatment in a GCM are unfounded, because it sounds to me that's the way he's heading!
| Jeneral2885 chapter 15 . 11/7/2013
| steamboat chapter 15 . 11/7/2013
Congratulations! Another great chapter, and your Red Sox winning the World Series! Now we know what you've been up to. LOL!
| batty02 chapter 14 . 9/13/2013
Thanks for the story keep up the great job
| Jeneral2885 chapter 14 . 7/21/2013
Nice chapter. Sorry short review
| steamboat chapter 14 . 7/13/2013
Glad to see life's ducks are once again getting lined up for you. I continue to enjoy your well-written story! Thank you for sharing!
| db1019 chapter 14 . 7/12/2013
WOW! Have to agree with 'Flaunt' on his review of this -your writing is EXCELLENT! I could feel the tension in the atmosphere in the tent, as well as in the people involved, and could feel that tension build as the scene progressed. It really felt like we were there, watching it happen - breathlessly, I might add.
Was glad to see Markowitz step up as the brigade commander, take charge, and put St. Claire in his place - I didn't expect that. Clever that you had St. Claire come late to the meeting - allowing Markowitz and the others to hear the evidence and start to form their opinions first, and making him look like an arrogant ass.
Liked the way you explained Sean and Harm's observations of St. Claire's reactions to Mac's part of the briefing, alluding that he wasn't impressed with women - and glad that you had not only Harm, but Markowitz and the Sgt. Major, step up to intervene when St. Claire came at her physically.
Outstanding and well-written, your story-telling ability really stands out in this Chapter - can't wait to see what will happen next!
| flaunt chapter 14 . 7/12/2013
Wow. Great chapter. My favorite one of this story yet. Really like the writing in this one, it really felt like I was watching this unfold. Hell, I think I might have felt St. Clair's spit hit me in my face from standing too close to his shouting! :D
I was in that tent with the JAG lawyers and Markowitz et al. I could imagine/feel the desert heat and sand billowing through the tent flap, mirroring the heat and grit of the situation.
I can't wait to see where this goes next, and while I hope I don't have to wait so long between chapters, this one definitely made the wait worth it.
From one hectic real life schedule to another, I completely understand and feel your pain. Wish there were 27 hours in a day so we can get 3 hours sleep. Or to write. Or to sleep write (wish that was possible). :)
Again, great chapter, great writing, and I can't wait to see where we go next on this ride.
| byrhthelm chapter 14 . 7/12/2013
St Claire really is a grad A class 1 A-hole, he also strikes me as being not very bright. He, at the end of the chapter, issued a veiled threat to junior officers (only 1 step below him, but junior nevertheless) in front of a Brigade Commander who is already severely ticked off with him. Unless he straightens up and starts to fly right, I see an abrupt termination of his career in the not too distant future!
I must admit had I been in Mac and Harm's shoes here, I would have started the interviews immediately, starting with St Claire and his SM, while the rest of the SF were summonsed from their area to Bde HQ!
| bloodymary2 chapter 14 . 7/12/2013
Omnious cliffy. So you have to post more... please? P
| TnJAGAz chapter 13 . 6/18/2013
Very nice , I like the handling of the crude comment. Also like they way you've made this interaction plausible - good job! :)
| Jeneral2885 chapter 13 . 5/25/2013