|Reviews for Two Worlds Fanfic|
| Gandohar chapter 1 . 5/4/2017
Ah yeah... I can't wait for the next part.
| Kazarina chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Hey, tad bit of advice for speech it's best to when a diffrent person speaks to start on a new line. It's just by pressing enter and it makes it a whole lot easyer to read. Also makes it look like you've written a whole lot more than you really have and that can be quite good :-P