Reviews for The End of Our Beginning
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
but every one in the house would hear what happened because vapiers have super hearing
Sushi chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
That rocks ! U are a awesome writer ! I hope u get loads of reviews cas u really deserve them well done ! Xxx
Awwww chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Super cute! Loved that it was in Jasper's POV!
cyrielletta chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
LUV IT!
Bubblycutie and Awesomnessdude chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Oh god don't get me started about the vision! I thought it was real! I couldn't read the last book cause of my know it all cousin - then now i can read i lost interest of reading the series over.

When Carslie died my heart stop ._. When they killed Jasper my friend and i just started crying then hyperviling throughout the we cheered when Jane and finally Aro died :D and when we found out it was a vision i was freaked and kept yelling what?! XD and i calm

Ahaha sorry i loved this!

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Sabbi813 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Awwwww! That was cute (: "I kicked Jane's ass for you." I loved that part in the movie... Well not the fact that Jasper died, that was awful, but i just thought it was creative! (: GOOD JOB!
hiddensecret564 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
OMG! Right after I saw the movie I was thinking "what would happen if Alice told Jasper the vision?" then you made my wish come true! Thank you!
lol chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
I've already seen the movie too. And I've already thought about Alice's vision and if she would tell someone about it. You saved my day with writing this oneshot!
THANK YOU IT IS WONDERFUL!

XOXO lol
KLS98 chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Beautiful. Wonderfully written, i loved it. Jasper and Alice are my favorite of the series other then Bella and Edward. When i saw the movie i was so sad when it showed all of them die, but i almost cried when Jasper died. Overdramatics i know. I do love how Alice kicked Jane six ways to Sunday though. When it showed that it wasnt real i was thinking thank god. But if it was me watching my love die i would have been a wreck. I think that Alice would have reacted just like this, and that Jasper would be there like this as well. Captured the moment i thought of after the movie was over. Five stars:)
EmilyLTeague chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
This was really good! :)
Sabaku no Gnora chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
I literally was aghast and in hysterics when I saw the Volturi kill Jasper, and was on the brink of leaving the theater, but when I saw Alice chase after Jane, the entire theater exploded in cheers. When it turned out to be a vision I was both relieved and upset at the same time. Upset that Jasper would of died in the battle if there was a battle with the Volturi.
Alice and Jasper have been always my favorite pair in the book series, and just to see one of them die, and watch the other in pain from it was horrible.
I'm glad you wrote this oneshot, it made me open my eyes that their love is endless, even after death. So for that I thank you.
AngelWhiteRaven chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Good... I can just picture this in my mind. I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought there was a "void" from the battle that wasn't and them departing.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
I felt sad that twighlight saga is over. thank goodness we have books to read them over and over. and i like your piece of literature...
Sarah v chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Loved this, jalice is my favorite pairing, and if it wasn't for Alice this whole movie would have not happened and everyone would be dead and pissed!
UnfathomableEnigma chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
That was soooo sweet, I loved it!
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