|Reviews for Office Conduct|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2016
cute and funny! XD
i can just imagine Ed's awkward face when looking at her after that XD
and HEY! heres some random suggestions for storys!...(cuz your just so awesome at writing! and maybe you make these into something good)
1: were Ed gets taking and experimented on by someone trying to understand his clap-alchemy, it could have lots of Hurt/Awkward moments once he's taken, and nice parental moments once he's saved.
2: when Ed first joins the military. because i loved 'Hazing' and i loved the moments of Ed thinking back about his first days in 'Another Run Of Events' you do an amazing with job with young Ed learning the ways of the military, and i would love a full fic on just that :)
3: where Ed and Havoc go undercover as brothers, maybe something to do with drama/suspense? maybe trying to catch a torturer/killer? there could be some funny 'lets talk about girl' moments from Havoc too XD...i love those moments! but focus more on the mystery. and of course a bit of HurtEd lol
and heres some random little ideas:
-trying to catch an escaped chimera-
-Ed is in the bank when it starts being robbed-
-Ed and Al on the island-
Kay! thanks for reading my long review lol XD (..at least..i hope you still read reviews yet on old storys)
| LifeIsABowlOf chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
Never stopped to read this one. I enjoy the office relationship displayed here. Edward has an easily likable quality when he's young and innocent and its comforting to see the responsible adults in his life providing accordingly. Sad he didn't have a greater support structure just a few years earlier.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2016
Ha xD I forgot about this hilarious fic
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
Oh god this was hilarious xD Poor Ed... Poor Hawkeye! Dealing with stupid boys all day xD
| Centre chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
Haha! XD This was so funny! I'm definately adding this to my favourites! Good job!
| EasyArsenic chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
I LOVE THIS! Haha. First of all, I really enjoy reading fics where Ed's doing some of the more mundane, commonplace tasks given to those in the military. Second, I loved the way you represented him as what he really was at this point and time... a kid. I think a lot of people tend to really overlook that, though both anime do their best at throwing in reminders. It was downright adorable. And the characterization was spot on. I just... I loved it. 3
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
GENIUS! any person who can read this without laughing needs to be banned from the internets. Mwahahaha
| batsbloodsoup chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
I am horse laughing! :D Amazing!
| lilyflower chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
Oh Ed...you gotta luv him when he does things like this. Fun read! Your Hawkeye was perfect! She's badass! Good for her protecting the goods. Lily
| NorthernMage chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Ed will figure it out eventually...late/post FMAB.
Roy enjoyed that way too much. Wish he had told Hawkeye about the water balloon comment, though. That bit was awesome!
Looking forward to more from you! Maybe some more oneshots like this?
| aquariTerrible chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
It begins. Reading your other fics, that is.
I laughed so loud at this! That conversation is almost 100% something that I had heard several times in grade school (and was shamefully a part of one of them. "I kicked her boob. I said sorry! It was an accident, we were on the ice. Blah blah blah."). So, perfect right on. Yep. Thats definitely a realistic phrasing and response. Funny things are always easiest to remember in a fic.
I really enjoyed how you had Ed asking all those questions about the paperwork- again soo realistic, and its a great show-dont-tell about his intelligence (even though the show is all "he's a genius! smart kid. genius!" a few times).
I love how you give the female characters more depth (! it was very skimmed over, crunched, and lacking I found a lot in FMA and FMA:B as far as I've seen. Its nice to see Riza and Pinako in the other story have more to say and do)
This is just too great. Frickin Mustang too, that man is an AWFUL influence. But such GOOD characterization and just playing the kid in that way. I- Its just a huge amount of fantastic all crammed into these words.
And again, I cannot stress how good you are at phrasing it so it paints the scene! Thats the biggest thing in fic IMO, if it can be read like watching the show, or watching a skit or anything like that- its got a huge advantage.
| The Reading Elf chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Oh! Too funny!
| Blackwind137 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
I could not stop laughing...Oh my god, that was fricken rich! Very well done, my friend!
| Bishie Huntress chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
I've gotta say, I liked the water balloon bit, but what really cracked me up was Mustang's conversation with Hawkeye afterward. I kept waiting for him to mention the water balloons. XD
| MemoriesOfVoxei chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
OMG This was so funny! I was smiling like a madman in my school's cafeteria! I couldn't help but laugh out loud! This was amazingly good! I liked it a bunch! I would have liked to see Hawkeye reaction to the "water balloon" sentence! It could have been funny too! Seriously, though, OUTSIDE! I'm impressed Riza didn't simply pulled the trigger at Roy for saying something like this to Ed, for ENCOURAGING a CHILD to have SEXUAL activities as long as it's OUTSIDE of the office and off the clock!
YOU FUCKING KILLED ME WITH THIS ONE!
P.S. I apologize for the use of bad words. It seems I have been a tiny bit influenced by our favourite Edward Elric wonderfully well kept in characters in your fics!