|Reviews for Office Conduct|
| The Reading Elf chapter 1 . 2/22
Oh! Too funny!
| Blackwind137 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
I could not stop laughing...Oh my god, that was fricken rich! Very well done, my friend!
| Bishie Huntress chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
I've gotta say, I liked the water balloon bit, but what really cracked me up was Mustang's conversation with Hawkeye afterward. I kept waiting for him to mention the water balloons. XD
| MemoriesOfVoxei chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
OMG This was so funny! I was smiling like a madman in my school's cafeteria! I couldn't help but laugh out loud! This was amazingly good! I liked it a bunch! I would have liked to see Hawkeye reaction to the "water balloon" sentence! It could have been funny too! Seriously, though, OUTSIDE! I'm impressed Riza didn't simply pulled the trigger at Roy for saying something like this to Ed, for ENCOURAGING a CHILD to have SEXUAL activities as long as it's OUTSIDE of the office and off the clock!
YOU FUCKING KILLED ME WITH THIS ONE!
P.S. I apologize for the use of bad words. It seems I have been a tiny bit influenced by our favourite Edward Elric wonderfully well kept in characters in your fics!
| RedL11Tditrict chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Oh wow, this was entirely unexpected but very cute. This really cast the office like a house, you can see Hawkeye as the caring but stern mom, Mustang as the novas but trying father, and Ed is like the foster child thrown into the mix. I loved how he imagined Mustang hanging up the phone and swallowing him. I got more than one laugh reading this write more foolhardy comedy. It's great.
| KissMeDeadlyT-T chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
OH GOD YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW HARD I LAUGHED I NEVER LAUGH THIS HARD AT THINGS but god I was choking and rolling and jeeeeeeez this was freaking awesome. x'D
By the way, thepumpkinqueen712 told me to come here, and I'll admit I was not expecting this whatsoever. I'm not disappointed in the least though. xD
| thepumpkinqueen712 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
yOU you just ruined it
My eyes are bleeding
And here I thought I would never had the misfortune of something like this scraping my eyes out and shoving them back in
But hey, it was well written, I can say that very honestly and truthfully
BUT YOU RUINED ME I JUST SAW RIZA AS A MOTHER FIGURE I AM RUUISDFGIINNNDEDDDD
| NameNO0 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
Yeah go ahead outside the office Ed. Fist time Ed shows up in Roy's office with a red hand print across his cheek he's going to be p'oed. Yet another good read. Please keep them coming. I can't decide if I like the longies or the shorties better.
| EdenEight chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
This story was adorable! I love Hawkeye and it was great seeing her in the office trying to get through daily life. Her relationship with the colonel is so cute, and the way you her offering Ed support I was like...aww...I would end up doing that. How could you not. As a woman in the office, how could you not!
| Polaroid chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Is Ed a freaking idiot! LOL 0.0 Why did he squeeze! HAHAHHA
| Fl0384 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
This was SO CUTE! Watching Ed stutter out an excuse for this was great! You just wanted to hug him. It was sweet to see Hawkeye mad, but mad at the situation, and not mean to a little boy who dosn't know what the hell he's doing. Great job.
| INSPIREme chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
This was awesome! I just read your Hazing, and I was glad to see a brighter piece here. I love the perspective of Hawkeye in the office. As the only girl you know it must be like this for her. Where I work the guys are never taking it serious. It's cute to see her trying to bridge to Ed, and Ed is too adorable when he's little! His flustered self after feeling Hawkeye up was priceless. Keep ones like this coming! I am off to read Christmas.
| lluviabrillante chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
So so cute. I love embarrassed 12 year old Ed. I love Mustang's advice and that Hawkeye realized he was waiting for her.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
it's called a breast. loved it.
| OscarWinner chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
So LOVED IT! Hawkeye was awesome, she’s being all nice and understanding about things, and then she just bursts into action. Ed’s so cute when he’s small and clueless! Gotta tell you, in reading this and some of your other stuff, I really like your Roy character. Keep writing!