|Reviews for From Vague, Tinted Conversations|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
In the summary, I think you mean "wonder", not "wander". Just so you're aware.
| Anon chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
Hi:) You have amazing ideas and a big ambition - writng 50 stories for Alex Rider! Wow! I don't think I have enough patience or ideas to do that!
I really liked this story. You get an indepth view of how Alex thinks, which you don't get in the books, so thank you for the amazing story.
I'm looking forward to the rest of the collection:)
I have a small- okay big request, could you do one on Alex's wife and future family and their lives? It would be interesting to see Alex's job in their eyes!
I would totally understad f you decided not to do it - no hard feelings! But it's just an idea.
Thank you so much!
| Empty Thoughts chapter 2 . 11/18/2012
I like it. I like how you set it up in the first chapter.
Though I think since you're writing through the therapist's point of view, you should leave Alex's thoughts out. The therapist doesnt know what Alex is thinking, right? Especially since its in first persons PoV. I guess you could make a line break then switch to Alex's PoV but then it would be really messy.
One last thing, to wander means to go off somewhere. Like 'she wandered off into the forest early in the morning.' To wonder (I think this is what you mean) means to wish to know something. 'I wonder if she likes chocolate.'
You get it?
| Cool chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Awe cool :) Angsty Alex is the best! I think it would be a nice emotional touch to the story if he was kind of bad ass and didn't talk to the therapist, then breaks down once she really gets to him.
| Albany chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Chapter excellent, I like the therapist knows teens, spy or spies, they are special and need to be treated differently from their minds.
she looks good in that aspect. can not wait to know how the story goes.
| Iliveinapineappleunderthesea chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Ohhhh! This sounds really good! Plus the writing is great quality! I think I'm using exclamation marks too much in my reviews...
Please update soon, pretty please?