|Reviews for I Fight For Love|
| Chrissykat chapter 1 . 2/22
I'm interested in another chapter. Love these two couples.
| ClatoOTP1 chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Wow! That was so good; I have a lump in my throat! I'm glad they got the endings I always thought they deserved! You should definitely write another chapter!
| ShyMoonstone chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
really good! i 3 Hector & Andromache!
| SHANTE LEE chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
IT'S AMAZING. WRITE MORE CAHAPTERS ABOUT BRISEIS AND ACHILLES.
| Remember When It Rained chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
This is great as a stand alone but I would love to read more! Maybe more from Achilles and Hector reconciling. They way you wrote this, they could end up truly respecting each other and possibly liking one another as more than enemies. Just a thought but do with this what ever you like and I will gladly read!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
im intrestend keep it up
| wendy778 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
That was good. Write another chapter
| ShyMinnie chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
I know you haven't updated this in a while, but I definitely think you should consider writing another chapter for the story. I loved the movie Troy and the relationship between Hector and Andromache. They were my favorite couple, and I wanted to practically strangle Paris and Helen for bringing a war to the city over their 'love' for each other. I felt really bad for Andromache when the fight scene between Achilles and Hector ended, and I almost cried with her when Hector died. I was really happy to find a well-written story with an alternate ending to that scene.
I don't have much criticism except for when it comes to the dialogue parts. It's not a big deal, but I'm just more familiar to dialogues with the two quotation marks ("...") rather than the single marks ('...'). Usually when something is punctuated with these marks ('...'), I think they're the thoughts of a character.
Overall, it was a wonderful start, and I hope you decide to continue writing the story one day!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
i love it...its perfact. i always wanted it to end like this but i counld never rewrite it so wonderfuly. well done.
| Dante 101 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I have to say, this turnout is better than the one they did in the movie. The ending was somewhat disappointing. Please write more.
| A Light in the Night chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Another chapter! Your writing style is great and I thnk the beginning of the plot has promise! I would really appreciate more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Please write more :-)
| naiariddle chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
I love your story! Hector and Andromache its my favourites couple of the movie
| lovetolie chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
I honestly have no words to express how amazing this chapter was, everything flowed perfectly and I seriously encourage you to continue the story, it has so much potential, id honestly stick around to read and review through it all if you decide to make it a full story! This also feeds my Andromache-Hector obsession,! They were so cute and I wish Hector hadn't died in "Troy"!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Please do it was a great frist chapter.