Reviews for I Fight For Love
Kitty Amadeus chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Love it so so so so so so so much! Great ending, rare and... beautiful. Please continue, make it a story why don't ya! :)

Sincerely,
xxxox
Catherine du Beau
Jofrench22 chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
Oh my god! This is an amazing first chapter! It's too bad you don't seem to update more chapter! This is exactly how i wished Troy would have happened! I would like so much to see the life of Achilles and Briseis as a married couple and why not with some kids! And Troy with an Hector alive! Please if you ever find inspiration again for writing this story then please do so because it's so good! Please UPDATE! Bye!
Chrissykat chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
I definitely would love to see another chapter of this story.
spoiled princez chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Now this is a very wonderful alternate ending. Your summary alone got me interested. I guess a 'what-if' plot twist like Hector not dying is bound to happen in fics in this fandom, but you wrote it so beautifully I just can't stop reading until the end! It's really, really good. Briseis and Achilles' part was very nice too. Ah, the transition from young love to passionate love between a husband and wife, as the very wonderful scene with Andromache and Hector came next. Really nice ending. :))
joanne-dijkemalive.nl chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
I absolutely loved the part about Hector and Andromache:)
Chrissykat chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
I'm interested in another chapter. Love these two couples.
ClatoOTP1 chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Wow! That was so good; I have a lump in my throat! I'm glad they got the endings I always thought they deserved! You should definitely write another chapter!
ShyMoonstone chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
really good! i 3 Hector & Andromache!
SHANTE LEE chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
IT'S AMAZING. WRITE MORE CAHAPTERS ABOUT BRISEIS AND ACHILLES.
Swan Crawley chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
This is great as a stand alone but I would love to read more! Maybe more from Achilles and Hector reconciling. They way you wrote this, they could end up truly respecting each other and possibly liking one another as more than enemies. Just a thought but do with this what ever you like and I will gladly read!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
im intrestend keep it up
wendy778 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
That was good. Write another chapter
ShyMinnie chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
I know you haven't updated this in a while, but I definitely think you should consider writing another chapter for the story. I loved the movie Troy and the relationship between Hector and Andromache. They were my favorite couple, and I wanted to practically strangle Paris and Helen for bringing a war to the city over their 'love' for each other. I felt really bad for Andromache when the fight scene between Achilles and Hector ended, and I almost cried with her when Hector died. I was really happy to find a well-written story with an alternate ending to that scene.

I don't have much criticism except for when it comes to the dialogue parts. It's not a big deal, but I'm just more familiar to dialogues with the two quotation marks ("...") rather than the single marks ('...'). Usually when something is punctuated with these marks ('...'), I think they're the thoughts of a character.

Overall, it was a wonderful start, and I hope you decide to continue writing the story one day!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
i love it...its perfact. i always wanted it to end like this but i counld never rewrite it so wonderfuly. well done.
Dante 101 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I have to say, this turnout is better than the one they did in the movie. The ending was somewhat disappointing. Please write more.
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