Reviews for SAFAI
blindredeyes chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
kya safai ki dono ne. Aur musi kya muh pe jawab marti hai. Uska yehi nature mujhe bohot pasand hai. Lov u musi. Akhir us jhalle ko aur kon jhel paega. Haina?
Vampire Breath chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
itni bari smile ayi ke mouth phatne wala tha :p
adiya chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
i like it. so funny DUO.
Kdlove-uall chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
hey very nice nd I enjoyed it...love duo's funny moments.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Hey create maariage story of abhijeet and tarika from halde raasam(tumeric) to shaadi
abhirika luv chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
wow really nice a big smile appeard on ,y face
GD chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
Nice, but too short...
DewDrop29 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Bohat badi smile aai face pa it was awsome enjoyed alot:D
darknite0403 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Itni badi smile ayi ki ye jagah kafi nahi hai...

Fav line:

They started with most clean room in the house….. Daya's room… the only person who gives clean room certificate to that room is DAYA…

Ye chooti mein itni achi ideas bi athi hai ki apney chooti cancel kardi humarey liye ;)
abhirika luv chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
really a nice story a smile on my face
girl.with.passion chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Haha.. such a cute story. Really liked it. :D
angel khan chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
awesome story;p
Poesia-Riptide chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
lol poor girls! :D
really fun story! :) :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
vry big smile...
really ur story is vry fny & enjoybl...
gr8 atmpt...keep it up...do write more & more abt duo & abhirika...
all th bst...thanxxxx...
Metallic Mist chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
aww..that was soo sweet...well jaha tak smile ka sawal hai...duo ki kahaniya to hamesha muakuraane par majboor kar deti hai ]. really loved it...do write more like this... loved it!
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